great! please update=D

When will the next chapter be up.

This is a great start + promises to be a fantastic story. I can't wait to read more.

Oh good start, really intregued, keen to see more, keep it up.

Like the story so far, looking forward to the next chapters. Keep up the good work.

this story has a lot of potential. cant wait to see some more great chapters

This is a great start. I already really like the character Allison. Can't wait to read more!