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Wow! This was so great and heartbreaking and snarky and well written all at the same time! I really hope the epilogue comes up soon. Will there be any more of the interesting stuff from Tom's viewpoint? I hope so. Thanks for writing!

OH NO! Thank God this isn't the end, I might have a heart attack or something. I realize that Harry needs some "away time" but this sucks. I'm really excited for the next chapter.

I have read many hp/tr stories, but I must say yours is, by far, the most amazing one I have ever read. Not only did you add amazing twists and turns, but you also kept the characters
true to their nature and kept the dialogue impeccable. I can't wait to read
the epilogue. It's writers like you that fanfiction ( books!) need to kept an
audience interesting in reading. Please finish soon, I really want to find out
what happens.

Silent r. Fearie

I am an avid lover of this story... but in all honesty, I was not expecting such an abrupt ending. It's like you just built up this huge story, as well as the character development between Tom and Harry. All of these detailed, gripping chapters... to end with a quick explanation and a "Goodbye, Tom". It reminded me of the classic silent films, that were viewed slightly faster than what they had been filmed at. I imagine Chaplin making a speedy getaway.


So really, come on. I know you could give us something that would drench our hearts in an awe of amazement. Yes, I suppose your conclusion is adept, but I think we all know how much better it could be.

WHAT! Brilliant story you got here! Please please please get the epilogue out soon. Or a sequel? -hopeful eyes- I love the HP/LV pairing, will Tom ever realize what he feels? Will they ever get back together?

I must say I greatly enjoyed your story, more then i expected to! I must admit that i had never expected Minerva as the spy at hogwarts. In fact i had first thought it to be a house elf or a portrait. But then Luna started talking about those thingy's and I changed my mind and thought it was one of them. But then one line caught my eye where you mentioned the figure doing something with it's robes and i was like 'dammit, it's a wizard' but i still had no idea who it was, what a surprise!
I am feeling sorry for the terrible two right now, though. Poor Pet, he admits his love but is unable to handle V-babies rejection of it. ANd V is totally an ass. Maybe now that pet's run off he will admit to loving the other. Hmm? Please? or at least make him kill Bells, it would make me feel a bit better. >.<
Anyway! I totally love you writing ability and am on my way to read more of your stories!
Ta-luv!
-Miishii

That was the most depressing thing I've read in a while. I'm too sad to even cry. Good description on Harry's feelings of uselessness, and the extreme action he took fits his character, but that doesn't make me any less sad. Hope inspiration and opportunity find you soon. I'm sure enough readers are yelling and screaming at you to write more, so I'll just say take your time and do a good job. Thanks for the wonderful read.

Hmm this sounds interesting.

man, you're ugly

Okay, I like the story, etc., etc., but what I REALLY had to comment on was the last little bit. In your author note. Because, well... First of all, I had this image of a happy-go-lucky, polite Voldemort chattering about cookware. Then I thought "But what if he isn't nice?" which led me to my current mental image: Voldemort smiling and happy, then coming to the part where they say, "From any other company, this product would be $80--$100!" and him going, "We'll AVADA KEDAVRA THOSE PRICES!", furiously glaring as green light demolished the price on the screen. Oh, I'm keeping this image. It's fun. ^^

Oh i forgot before!
Thanks for the recommendation on Shadow of the Templar on your profile. I am now thoroughly obsessed with Simon and Jeremy's dysfunctional (non) relationship.
Not only are you a good writer but you have good taste.
Once again loved the story
Ta Ta

can`t wait for you`re next chapter. You`ve got me hanging in wait

I like this story, but the end... Waht is it this behalf end? This is very very horrible end(Yes, I know, could be over horrible). But story is nice. Harry je amazing, sweet. Voldemort is... Voldemort. Pretty and Little Pretty are OOC, but this is OK, Sweet ;o).

WOW. Like WOW. I can't believe that you're not a writer by profession! You're writing skills is just amazing! You can do the passion, the mystery, the suspense, the thrill, the twists and turns, and really you are just really good. I pride myself on being able to predict the ending...but how Harry was revealed and just GENIUS. And you didn't go for the predictable fluff...as a matter of fact you kept it real.

You're one of those writers who wants to make the reader go back and say "REREAD TIME" LOL.

Thanks for the wonderful story! This is the most believable Tom and Harry pairing ever! AND. I love the fact that Harry is not infallible. And that everything was interwoven...not a detail that was mentioned was ever unimportant. :D

Good JOB!