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SlytherinQueen020
2009-11-06 . chapter 1
Hmm this sounds interesting.
u
2009-11-05 . chapter 1
man, you're ugly
Alexander
2009-11-05 . chapter 21
Okay, I like the story, etc., etc., but what I REALLY had to comment on was the last little bit. In your author note. Because, well... First of all, I had this image of a happy-go-lucky, polite Voldemort chattering about cookware. Then I thought "But what if he isn't nice?" which led me to my current mental image: Voldemort smiling and happy, then coming to the part where they say, "From any other company, this product would be $80--$100!" and him going, "We'll AVADA KEDAVRA THOSE PRICES!", furiously glaring as green light demolished the price on the screen. Oh, I'm keeping this image. It's fun. ^^
ACynicAndProudOfIt
2009-11-03 . chapter 39
Oh i forgot before!
Thanks for the recommendation on Shadow of the Templar on your profile. I am now thoroughly obsessed with Simon and Jeremy's dysfunctional (non) relationship.
Not only are you a good writer but you have good taste.
Once again loved the story
Ta Ta
Tarja Simonova
2009-11-01 . chapter 39
can`t wait for you`re next chapter. You`ve got me hanging in wait
Mania Dardeville
2009-11-01 . chapter 39
I like this story, but the end... Waht is it this behalf end? This is very very horrible end(Yes, I know, could be over horrible). But story is nice. Harry je amazing, sweet. Voldemort is... Voldemort. Pretty and Little Pretty are OOC, but this is OK, Sweet ;o).
MissSilver
2009-10-29 . chapter 39
WOW. Like WOW. I can't believe that you're not a writer by profession! You're writing skills is just amazing! You can do the passion, the mystery, the suspense, the thrill, the twists and turns, and really you are just really good. I pride myself on being able to predict the ending...but how Harry was revealed and just GENIUS. And you didn't go for the predictable fluff...as a matter of fact you kept it real.

You're one of those writers who wants to make the reader go back and say "REREAD TIME" LOL.

Thanks for the wonderful story! This is the most believable Tom and Harry pairing ever! AND. I love the fact that Harry is not infallible. And that everything was interwoven...not a detail that was mentioned was ever unimportant. :D

Good JOB!
megblue
2009-10-29 . chapter 39
so i love this story very much. so when are you goin to post it again, i so totally in love with it. hope it doesnt end there. does it
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2009-10-29 . chapter 39
PLZ~ update soon!!
been waitin for ages for your epilogue >.<
hope you are actually writing it! hope you havnt forgotten!
i will just keep hoping...
ACynicAndProudOfIt
2009-10-27 . chapter 39
Oh my god! That was so good. Love this story. Love. Love. LOVE IT.
I liked how you ended it. A bit anti climatic, but as you said Dumbledore's death was the end, the rest is just closure.
I REALLY need more closure. I check in with this story every time I turn on my computer to see if it is updated. I really hope you finish it and virtual hugs and kisses to help the epilogue come along.
Take as long as you need to finish but expect me to have come up with my own scenarios to how it ends (aka. smut). I need something to tide me over.
Once again, loved it.
Hope you update soon!
Yauvanika
2009-10-22 . chapter 39
If you do not writye that epilogue, i will hunt you down and shove a chicken bone down your throat. Then I will pull off each of your nails...and i cant come up with anyhting more inventuive than that...just hurry up and update!
darkmoon666
2009-10-20 . chapter 39
Oh wow, I am so ready for the epilogue! Though I'll be terribly sorry when it ends because this is awesome... I really hope you are nearly done with all the editing and such considering its been nearly 4 months since you posted that note...
Yep, amazingly awesome, and I love how Harry finally took things into his own hands and left after the lack of attention paid to him by Tom.
~Moony
darkmoon666
2009-10-19 . chapter 34
WOW. That is all I can say for this chapter... Damn, I really hope Harry gets back to his real time soon because I do not like the change... When I first read it I was like, 'what?' so I reread it... Now I'm going to the next chapter and hope that its HarryxVoldemort love :)
~Moony
Oh, fantastic job so far! This story is making my favorite's list...
TutelaTwin
2009-10-18 . chapter 39
zomg! i can't believe you did that! poor peoples... ~pets harry's head.~

Gosh, Harry really does have Valerian wrapped around his little finger, doesn't he? What I want to know is how long it takes for Dante and Valerian to storm in and demand to know why they shouldn't kill Tom for what he did to Harry. And Tom's too devistated to do anything other than weep, which he wouldn't allow himself to do, or curse them, which would be ineffective and a really bad idea.
Is Dante going to haul him off to fix things like I think he might, or is he going to act on his threat now that Voldemort's hurt Harry? Because I can see both with equal clarity. Dante storming in and demanding to know why the hell Harry's gone back to ...Valerian' realm. Then either killing Tom or going to drag Harry back and force them to make up.
cyne
2009-10-16 . chapter 39
Finally finished this story, and I loved it. Can't wait for the ep. This was fun.
cyne
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