i love it

Good idea. . .

That was great :) I had someone tell me about this awhile ago when I mentioned an idea for a belly dancer fic and then stumbled onto it by chance tonight. Funny how that works, huh? :) Anyways, she was right, I liked it :) Nicely written and I liked Jack's character.

that would easily cover up brendans character. though if you look at his facial expression, its the "please dont tell her my dirty secret" look. i remember this because its the best facial expression in the movie, that and brendan crying...an other favorite. keep me happy! write me write me! how about this part: "o'connell if you give me that gold stick there, you can shave my head, wax my legs and use me for a surfboard." "didn't we do that in tripoli?"

Very funny...definitely an interesting twist on the belly dancer. :)

LOL! What a great idea! I hadn't thought of that angle before, and it certainly is *not* "what it sounds like" after this story! A classic fic! Well done!

This was GREAT. HEeheehee. Favorite!

Hey, that was hilarious and really creative!But don't put these breaks and paragraphs things next time if you are working in composer, guy, it makes text messy and hard to read. Best wishes***************Seti the Last/High Priest of Seth

This was so enjoyable. Thanks, I had a really good time. Hope you write some more.

Good job! I remember the line of TMR well. This explained it well!

Very creative! I enjoyed that and wished we could have seen it in a flashback in the movie.