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| nikki.02 2007-07-19 ch 14, | abuseLOVE this! and the ending was great, as was the rest of the story! |
| Trixie7 2007-07-04 ch 14, | abuseA lovely story - although I am now throughly resoled to phone my friends on the weekends! |
| chili-peppers 2007-06-26 ch 14, | abuseOMG! squee! What and ending! I loved it, so sweet when Danny was comfoting Lindsay after she came out of the interogation and the ending was so beautiful with them waking up in eachothers arms! And i laughed when he told her he knew she climed into his bed lol "busted". Im so sad to see this end:( You rock and your an amazing writer! Great work :D P.S sorry for the late review i've been away on my hols lol. |
| debra Peterson 2007-06-25 ch 8, anon. | abuseNice twist! #3 is missing--can't wait to read on. It's a great story! |
| Yemam2422 2007-06-22 ch 14, | abusePerfect ending! I didn't actually know what tempered glass meant when I started reading this but I love how you tied it into the conclusion - that whole conversation was very natural. Great chapter and amazing story on a whole. |
| Angel-of-vampires 2007-06-20 ch 14, | abuseaww... perfect ending! |
| astacia 2007-06-19 ch 14, anon. | abuseAbsolutly fabulous. They are just too cute. Would love to have more from you. Please write again soon. |
| CSIMel 2007-06-19 ch 14, | abuseGreat job with this. Lovely emotions - you captured the characters wonderfully. And on that note, very much IC - nice. A lovely metaphor to leave us with. Was wondering throughout when the whole 'tempered glass' was going to come into it ;) Again, a wonderful fic. Well written, well developed plot. A lovely combination of casework, character development and romance. Great job XD |
| ReJo 2007-06-19 ch 14, | abuse1) I really like the way you explain 'tempered glass' and you conclude by using it as an analogy. “You can push me away all you want, Montana,” he said, allowing his hand to rest on her jaw. “But when you break into a million pieces, I’ll be the first to put you back together.” 2) "And it had taken her falling to pieces for her to realize how much she really did need Danny in her life... It had forced her to be vulnerable, to be open, to lean on someone else for support for a change, instead of always trying to deal with it on her own." [Quite profound. The story of my life. Honestly. Sometimes we do ourselves a disservice by being TOO independent; we need to give others the opportunity and satisfaction of being needed.] 3) The conversation where Lindsay finds out that Danny knew that she had gotten in bed with him was so funny! You *have* to know by now how much I've enjoyed this story! |
| PrettyEyes72 2007-06-19 ch 14, | abuseCyko, your killer was a really sadistic bastard. His convoluted logic makes one think though: would anyone miss us if we weren't around for a few days? You wrote a fantastic multi-faceted fic. I look forward to your next one. :) |
| JennCorinthos 2007-06-19 ch 14, | abuseGreat, Great ending... I loved it... This was so good... And I love that you ended it with them in eachother's arms.. Thiswas a great story... JENNIFER |
| notesofwimsey 2007-06-19 ch 14, | abuseI like the way that you tie Lindsay's emotional state up in the same way that a case is tied up: not that it is over, or that everything is fully understood, but that the 'team' (in this case Danny and Lindsay' has reached a resolution within themselves. The final scene was sweet and felt right - that they are back to the teasing, intimate relationship. |
| Judith0912 2007-06-19 ch 14, | abuseExcellent end to what's been a great story :) Loved it :) |
| biancapj 2007-06-19 ch 14, | abuseLoved, loved this story. Danny's line about putting Lindsay back together when she shatters just about made me melt. This story is one of the best. Great work! |
| Nicole 2007-06-19 ch 14, anon. | abuseSo amazing! Loved the storylines mixing. Love that they could just be comfortable with each other. Keep up the great writing |