  Tri-Emperor of The Twilight 2008-10-21 . chapter 1PenPen the Shinigami works for me. |
| kattastic999 2008-06-20 . chapter 1 o.k. that was weird... |
| lukas21 2008-01-06 . chapter 1 jajajajjajajajjaja great history jajajajajjajajjaa
this is another SO-GREAT point of view about pen-pen... that penguin is great |
| Rose1948 2007-08-29 . chapter 1 *giggles* Always DID think that there was something rather strange about that penguin... |
| Kalis-nin 2007-06-28 . chapter 1 Several things come to mind one is could happen! Another is when did Penpen die, or is he aw never mind funny on another plain of existence. I am glad you wrote this. |
| NamelessHeretic 2007-06-27 . chapter 1 I always knew there was something off about that penguin... |
| Hara Kazuma 2007-05-11 . chapter 1 I laughed so hard I think I broke something. |
| Mr. Lee 2007-05-11 . chapter 1 Hey there old friend :). A BleacxEvangelion crossover huh? I've seen stranger. PenPen a Soul Reaper XD?!! Definitely worth a few chuckles LOL XD! Short, sweet and a good chuckle. Good job as always my friend (Try to cut down on the coffee XD. I'm a tea man myself LMAO XD.)! Later :)! |
| Dartz... 2007-05-10 . chapter 1 Nice work... I can't say much more. But I'll be damned if there wasn't something weird about that bird. Maybe that was it?
Fun...And long enough... 700-900's about the average.
Good Work. |
| Himonky 2007-05-10 . chapter 1 lol
Another good contribution to the onehour oneshots pile. A bit shorter than some, but very polished. No grammar or spelling problems that I noticed. These tend to have problems like that (it's understandable with the time restraint), but this one doesn't seem too.
And an interesting focus. I've never seen Bleach, but the idea you've shown here is pretty good. Would make for an interesting anime or serious Eva crossover. Still, what you've got here is surprising and funny.
Good work for another hour.
EvSoc Reviewer: Himonky |
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