Oh my God, even though it was depressing I still loved it. And its creepy on how every way Jack tired to kill himself I tried the same way and failed. Keep up the good work.

Wow, what an amazing story!! This is my first ever review and I just wanted to say that I can't wait for future chapters! Your idea for your story is very imaginative, and so emotional I was nearly crying in several places! Your descriptions of the characters emotions are very realistic, its very powerful. I was totally hooked all the way through.