That was hilarious. XD

"This was in part sponsored by Trojan!" Wow. Just...wow. XD

I know as a critic I should probably say something to help you improve your fic but... I just can't! -Has recently gotten a book on how to write a book and it adds you need to be a good critic-

You rock and this fic does too, so keep it up TMA...! This is Kris.

Hey! It is a really late bday present, today is my half bday! :) Anyway, even better than the first one! Loved the sponsor, good thing you put that in there. A little disturbing with the hard-core-sex, but funny! Loved it! Can't wait to here more!

I twitched every time the static cut something out. But it was funny.