...Jade's last line was a complete and utter WIN!

Well written. Fun read.

i loved it

Oh this is absolutely brilliant.

Adorable xD
Even as children, they're completely in character.

Hahaha! Cute, even if Jade was a little monster.

The dialogue between them is really good. I like how you handled Jade. It was easy to believe he was a prodigal boy with the solid speech habits. Peony put up with him awfully well, considering the harassment! X'D

The end is cute. Nice to see the bond developing!

Awesome!! Jade as a kid is as sarcastic as he is even now that he is older. You've portrayed them greatly and the dialogues were very well written. Great job!! =3

That was adorable, I especially like the ending part. Kinda like a premonition of their friendship to come, so good job on all parts. It was well written and Jade was so Jade and in character, gottsa love it. Awesome work.

This is a good story. You did well for the first interactions of Jade and Peony. This was extremely well-written.

This seems rather reminiscent of one of the novels. It's an enjoyable take on it in my opinion. Jade and Peony's banter was rather amusing to read.

Aww.
A very cute story. And I love how Jade is so in character. Very well done. ^ ^

Very Cute xD

Yay for Peony and Jade~!! They rock.

Aw, how cute! The story leaves this warm feeling in your heart and sets a good history for their relationship. Good job!

XD Aww.
Just, aww.

This is an interesting piece indeed.
Sarcastic!Jade as a child is so cute. XD
Poor Saphir. Lol.
I like this story, it's well-written with great dialogue and characterization. (:
Good work on this fic, I really enjoyed reading it.

Super-cute! I really enjoyed this!

XD That's awesome. Jade as a kid is aWesome. This whole thing is cute and awesome. Jade I luvs you. lolz ^.^;; Gotta stop typing that.