wow! this is such a dynamic chapter! you are truly an excellent writer! all the characters were very well done as always, and the action was amazing! you never cease to thrill and amaze me! update soon!

you finally updated! im so excited! this was a brilliant chapter! as always your descriptions were superb! well done and update again soon!

I'm very excited about this new update. I really like how you changed the point of views in this chapter. Not only that you switched from the muggle's point of view to Sirius' point of view, which was totally awesome, but also that this chapter presents Regulus from an outsider's view of the situation, and his brother's view of him.
I really liked how this chapter was barely even about Regulus, and he only said one sentence, but that one sentence indicated such a big change.
I enjoyed this a lot, you did a really wonderful job!

wow! im so glad you updated! this was a wonderful chapter! (well wonderfully written- terribly sad- i feel so badly for janice's poor kids!) it was wicked exciting and i cant wait to read the next chapter! update again soon!

This is really such a fantastic story. I like this chapter a lot because it was very intense. Please, please, please, continue!! I can't wait to read the rest!

Another great chappie. I was a little disappointed at the length of the sirius and regulus scene, but then I read your author's note and now am very much looking forward to that chapter =) The Voldemort Dumbledore duel was pretty crazy too.

OOh! Another cliffhanger! Nice foreshadowing too. It was cool how the Grim was in Regulus's dream and then Sirius comes in at the end of the chapter. Very awesome.

I was genuinely scared on Voldemort in this chapter. The way that you described him and the way that he spoke to the Death Eaters was completely chilling and horrifying, which was, of course, perfect for his character. Great job.

This chapter is really cool in that almost everything is exactly what it isn't. I love how you've kept that consistent throughout this chapter.

Oh, cliffhanger! Well, it really is literally a cliffhanger, the bridge did just collapse =). Well anyway, I really liked this chapter as well. The part where Snape says that no servant can have two masters was ironic, and I like how you made his character the one to say that. I also like how you had Regulus screw everything up with his expelliarmus, I really felt bad for him. Can't wait to see what happens next!

I'm really impressed with your characterization of Bella in this chapter. You've captured her maniacal self perfectly.

My favorite line was: "The gravestones reared up from the ground like black fingers that seemed to loom closer every minute, as if they were trying to ensnare him within their clutches."

I really like your word usage and the imagery that this line gives. So creepy.

Whoa this is so creepy and amazing at the same time. Your writing is really unique in that I totally understand Regulus, but also despise him at the same time. You've done a really great job of setting the scene here, as well as establishing the mood and tone. I really enjoyed it.

Very atmospheric, builds up the tension well, and you do a good job of conveying Regulus' mixed feelings.

You're good at making Harry Potter Stories. Well that's all for now!

Ciao and Aloha! (IT also means goodbye)

OOh! This is getting intense! Keep it going!