HAHAHAHA!
'Max, no one wants to kiss someone with morning breath.' xD Awesome!
Very cute!

Please write more. It was really cute. I loved it.

Btw, mutant karate cows?
Evil brain sucking raccoons?

short and cute.

aaww, so SWeet!

lol
VERY amuzing
i loved it!
lol

I like. =)


-Insane Winged Girl

AAW! That was the cutest! I loved the morning breath part. that was very clever. :)

Not bad.

yay!! I loved this!

Bb13

Are you planning in writing more oh I sure hope so!
Love Justice

Cute. But, uh, why WAS he in her bed? Did the flock's favorite pranksters leave him there? Ah well, cute anyway!

Ahhahahahah, the Voice told her to brush her teeth! And they both randomly go to the bathroom and then back to bed hhahaha. Yeah, this was pretty cool though. I love Fang and Max!

tee hee. I like. Cute. tee hee again. I love. I thought that was really awesome. (giggling like mad) Crappy feminine... crap hormones... crap stuff! (When I'm mad at myself I say crap about five times in a row. You know I'm mad when I fire off about 6 craps in one sentence. It's funny, though. Now if I say ticked, you're in trouble cuz that means I might rip some random kid's head off and throw it at you) But this was... SO SWEEKIN'! (infinitly awesome) SO getting Jwan to read this!

C'est bon, C'est BON! I like it!!. Cute, funny, smart,though short. I wish i was max in this fanfic.

Great story, I loved it, it was really good!!