 ShadowRose18 2008-10-28 . chapter 1HAHAHAHA!
'Max, no one wants to kiss someone with morning breath.' xD Awesome!
Very cute! |
 I<3therain 2008-06-19 . chapter 1 Please write more. It was really cute. I loved it.
Btw, mutant karate cows?
Evil brain sucking raccoons? |
 TheVelvetVoice 2007-12-30 . chapter 1short and cute. |
 Gabby 2007-11-09 . chapter 1 aaww, so SWeet! |
 maxride08 2007-09-11 . chapter 1lol
VERY amuzing
i loved it!
lol |
 Insane Winged Girl 2007-09-09 . chapter 1I like. =)
-Insane Winged Girl |
 Alexandra 2007-08-23 . chapter 1 AAW! That was the cutest! I loved the morning breath part. that was very clever. :) |
 Tigg 2007-08-19 . chapter 1 Not bad. |
 Black Butterfly13 2007-07-22 . chapter 1yay!! I loved this!
Bb13 |
 max ride girl 2007-07-14 . chapter 1Are you planning in writing more oh I sure hope so!
Love Justice |
 FredandGeorgetwinsoftheC.O.C.A 2007-06-12 . chapter 1Cute. But, uh, why WAS he in her bed? Did the flock's favorite pranksters leave him there? Ah well, cute anyway! |
 Gewher 2007-06-07 . chapter 1Ahhahahahah, the Voice told her to brush her teeth! And they both randomly go to the bathroom and then back to bed hhahaha. Yeah, this was pretty cool though. I love Fang and Max! |
 O' Future Ruler Maria Larry 2007-05-27 . chapter 1tee hee. I like. Cute. tee hee again. I love. I thought that was really awesome. (giggling like mad) Crappy feminine... crap hormones... crap stuff! (When I'm mad at myself I say crap about five times in a row. You know I'm mad when I fire off about 6 craps in one sentence. It's funny, though. Now if I say ticked, you're in trouble cuz that means I might rip some random kid's head off and throw it at you) But this was... SO SWEEKIN'! (infinitly awesome) SO getting Jwan to read this! |
 lndigo 2007-05-25 . chapter 1C'est bon, C'est BON! I like it!!. Cute, funny, smart,though short. I wish i was max in this fanfic. |
 Weasleygrlz07 2007-05-23 . chapter 1Great story, I loved it, it was really good!! |