It's a great story, and I hope you continue it.

hm...an interesting concept :) and one that I've certainly never read before! I like it! No particular complaints and nothing to add from me, love it and want to hear more! Naja

what a great story!

Very good story. I really like how you use all the characters. I'm looking forward to more.

How very teenager-ish of River to disappear without a word, cause endless worry for those aboard Serenity, all in the belief that she is protecting *them.* She'll probably be cross with the others for doubting her when she's found. One of the more normal things she's done, considering her age.

Continued strong writing. Good character insight and interactions.

Yes, the Urakhai would beat Reavers in the scary, icky department. Less mindlessly violent than a mind full of violence. Less frantic, but more organized.

I'm intrigued by the start of your story. Serenity's reason for being lost is plausible and your characters are dead-on in voice and behavior.