It was certainly vague, but contained just enough to let the reader know how it turned out. I liked it.

It is a little vague, but I don't think that's a bad thing. I like that I can draw my own conclusions as to what happened here. In fact, the reader could draw several, as what is said her could be coming from either of the Titan females. The use of the word "dimension" implies Raven, but this story still does point out that Raven and Starfire do have more than a few similarities in their experiences, more than people might think.

And many many kudos for the happy ending. The Titans really are a family, after all, and family endures. Great job!

That was good. happy 21st birthday and no, you're not old although I am roughly...8 years younger than you. I'll bet'cha that there is some 30 year old who writes some of this stuff, who has no scocial life, and does this stuff to find people who share in his interests. Just saying that made me feel self-consuous(sp) and also reminded me of a trip I took last year that just makes me want to shake my head in...embarassment? at myself.