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CileSuns92 9/19/11 . chapter 7
The first thing that drew me to this story was the title. Wonderful song.

Apart from that, great, great story! It was sad, heartbreaking and incredibly full of love all at the same time. It was also a bit of a blast in the past, but in a good way. Even if it was short you made this into a perfect story.

This image: 2He kissed her forehead before holding her close to his body in a tight hug, his arms wrapped around her tiny body, almost as if she were a letter and he were her envelope. He kissed the top of her head before resting his chin on it." genius! I had goosebumps when I read it. Just like the image of Meredith crying in the closet.

I know it has been years -literarly- that you have finished this, but I just found it and I wanted to thank you for this. Once again, wonderful story.
littlemissliketofight 7/13/08 . chapter 7
I am completely blubbering here... sob sob sob
shell36799 6/5/07 . chapter 7
i liked the story. i thought it was really good. i wish the real finale would've ended that way.
xiao chan 5/27/07 . chapter 7
Yay! Great story. Really great. And yeah, they are the yo-yo couple. I usually just referred to them as the neo-Ross-and-Rachel, but hey, yo-yo couple works too.

I'm really happy that Meredith and Derek are semi-happy. It works for them.

Again, wonderful, wonderful story.
xiao chan 5/27/07 . chapter 6
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DEREK! WHAT THE HELL DO YOU THINK YOU'RE DOING? AGH!

He's such a dick. I hate him. I hate him, I hate him, I hate him. But I don't really hate him. Because he's McDreamy and no matter how much of a McBastard he can be, he still has a nice guy complex, and I'm really, really hoping that you're going to be pulling that sometime soon.

Make Meredith stop laughing. It's not funny.

*le sigh* Onto chapter 7...
Lizzie9 5/27/07 . chapter 7
Such a cute ending. A realisitic ending, actually. Send it to Shonda and tell her this is season 4.
McMaryShepherd 5/26/07 . chapter 7
You know what you are? Amazing. :) That is what you are. I am stunned. My socks are knocked off. Wow. What a touching story. I love how she just reluctantly let him go, but her fought for her. YAY!
NNP1981 5/25/07 . chapter 7
That was awesome! If only that had happened on the show. This definitely helps keep my MerDer faith alive though. WONDERFUL story! Thanks for writing and sharing it with us!

Natalie :)

P.S. Can't wait for more of It's Not Over!
AFan17 5/25/07 . chapter 7
That was a great ending. I'm so glad they ended up together. I loved this story so much despite the angst. I hope you keep writing because I can't wait to read more of what you write. xoxox
isalee 5/25/07 . chapter 7
NO! i don't want this chpt to be the last one, i love this fanfic! pleas wirte more!
dumbbrunette273 5/25/07 . chapter 7
im sad that this one is over, but i like the start of your next one so its okay ]

this was definatly better than the show!
IluvMerDer 5/25/07 . chapter 7
Woah. It's over. But it ended well. :) Great job!
Hoot-Hoot-Ashie 5/25/07 . chapter 7
it was reallt good...a perfectly twisty ending for a MerDer fic
MarkandLexiefan 5/25/07 . chapter 7
I loved it and I differently loved the ending. thank's for posting it.

Brandy
MoonlightGardenias 5/25/07 . chapter 7
WHY couldn't the season end like this? Seriously...this was amazing. Beautiful. Heartbreaking, yes...but beautiful. I love the fact that yes, they are not completely happy in the end..but that they are on their way there. The ending was perfect, the both of them holding on to each other. Great job...off to check for that other story!
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