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| Silvermoonlight GJ 2008-01-14 ch 7,  | abuseBeautiful story, I really like the plot and I loved that Akemi really got her just deserts so to speak. The subtext was really heart warming to and really enjoyable to read :) |
| angeljanicemorgan4 2008-01-06 ch 7, | abuseit was a good story... i dont no though i didnt like how u made Xena and Gabby that intimate with each other. it was always in the air about them being gay. but its really weird reading about them actually doing sex things... its a little creepy... other than that good story.. u get a RED star |
| HAZMOT 2007-11-24 ch 7, | abuseI was almost disappointed Akemi gave in so easy. I love angst to much. Anyway, I think it was a great ending. I wanted it to be longer, but all good things must come to an end. I love the Gabrielle was so angry at Akemi for keeping Xena away from her and the funny ending with everyone wanting to see Xena and Gabrielle. Always interrupting. I hope to see more from ya. :D |
| HAZMOT 2007-10-01 ch 4, | abuseSo now that we know Akemi has lied all along. I wonder what is Gabrielle's next step is? I think there is going to be a furious fight to bring Xena back and getting Akemi to admit her crime is not going to be easy. I can't wait until next chapter. :D |
| HAZMOT 2007-09-18 ch 3, | abuseMan, you certainly have a lot of mystery, twist and turns in this. The fact that Xena can materialize at certain times and feel real to Gabrielle is spooky. But, there must be something Xena must achieve with Akemi first or she would be back. Now, I wonder what Aphrodite has to tell Gabrielle? I think there's trouble ahead. :D |
| Silvermoonlight GJ 2007-05-20 ch 2, | abuseThis is really good please continue. :) |
| Kate Granger-Potter 2007-05-11 ch 1, | abuseA Very promising start! i look forward to reading the next installment! |