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| alex's wonderland 2008-06-12 ch 1, | abuseThat was awsome! You're so good at writing, and i love this song, so it just makes this story all the better. I love the ending line. Perfect! |
| FlaminSquirrelz 2007-07-19 ch 1, | abusehey I never saw this story before! I liked it, I can totally see Dally doing that. C= |
2007-05-21 ch 1, anon. | abuseLove the song and this story. ;o Interesting how Dallas brought an observer... hehe I always enjoyed the thought of someone messing up their ex's car. D: |
| fantoallwritertonone 2007-05-16 ch 1, | abuseSee that BEFORE HE CHEATS is one of my favorite songs I must say I like this it really is a copy of the song |
| soda-me 2007-05-12 ch 1, | abuseGood idea! When I read the title I thought of Soda and Sandy or something, but Dally and Sylvia was just as good! Haha, I could see Dal doing that with Johnny just looking on nervously...;) |
| An-Jelly-Ca 2007-05-11 ch 1, | abuselol, I loved it, this was so Dally like! It was really good! |
| Scarlett7 2007-05-11 ch 1, | abuseHuh! It's funny- I ALWAYS think of Dally and Sylvia when I hear that song, but I never thought about the other way around... very creative! Scarlett |
| Lizz 2007-05-11 ch 1, anon. | abusethat's good! |