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JessDB 2008-09-13 ch 7,	abuselove this story
nobody 2008-09-03 ch 20, anon.	abuseA very good story. As someone said in reviews from chapter 15: "Why is it that we all like it when the hero/good guy becomes helpless? sigh. don't know but we do." So, I'd love you to write another story of this style (creepy and sadistic)
ForgottenSailor424 2008-06-12 ch 10,	abusewow so far, im loving this story! im off to read the rest now, but the last bit with the "I dont want you to die" and "then you wont kill me for doing this" is something could totally see happen on the show. its so them and if their first real kiss were to happen in a heated moment like that, your way is how it probably would go down. excellent story so far, and i look forward to reading the rest and the sequel.
BlueSea14 2008-06-10 ch 20,	abuseThis one is also absolutely wonderful. I really enjoyed how it was Booth. That was semi-predictable, in a way, since you hadn't made any of the other squints incredibly prominent in the beginning. Plus, it just made it that much more potent and edge-of-your-seat thriller, since we know it's Booth and it's Brennan and that just makes it...something, you know? The dynamics of the duo's relationship are also extremely interesting in this one. I loved your writing on their reactions to one another, and their reactions to events and et cetera. I think that one of my favorite parts - and I'm not sure why - was the one in this last chapter, when Brennan obviously wants to ask Booth more about why Gina was there, and what she did. It's a very good opener for a short little character study on Brennan's interactions with Booth about the event, and what he would tell her about it, and what they would have to work out. Actually, they kind of did work out some of those issues that Gina's words raised, considering they talked about it in the car. But still, I don't know why - maybe because I kind of am addicted to angst-with-a-happy-ending - that would make for a very interesting exploration of how Booth could deal with his torture. Especially since he was tortured phsyically, mentally and - essentially - sexually without Gina having gone too far with it. That kind of torture still leaves its marks, even if it didn't go as far as rape. Um...rambling. Okay, so, I'll stop myself here and let you know that I loved the story! :D
Laura 2008-03-30 ch 20, anon.	abuseExcellent story! Creepy and sadistic, but a good story. Thanks!
Sinkingboat 2008-02-12 ch 19,	abuseAH! Thank you! I am now happy. I was wondering when they'd start fighting fire with fire! I just want one good punch from Bones and Booth each when they see the brothers and sister! Nice one!Oh- you know i was saying that your works cool ya know? You don't need to be defensive becaus its good stuff. I was not offened. I was hoping Bones might use body heat to kepp Booth from dieing... cliche but so hot. lol. thanks for the tip on the other story. I'll check it out.
Sinkingboat 2008-02-12 ch 17,	abuseyou don't have to defend your work. I'm just say'n one man's opinion. For the record yours is one of the first Bone stories I thought was worth leaving a review for (i dont leave flames or whatever). Well now that Booth is free? I hope he heals up and goes Punisher on their ass.
Sinkingboat 2008-02-12 ch 16,	abuseok- what? Hello if they let him go he testifies... alibi? hulloh? he saw her... this makes no sense.
Sinkingboat 2008-02-12 ch 15,	abusesobbing? come on! "This is sick. It's like some twisted game of Russian Roulette, but with numbers. It's Russian Bingo." two thumbs up on that one.
Sinkingboat 2008-02-12 ch 13,	abusecome on booth has been tortured soo many times. he'll take it stoically.
Sinkingboat 2008-02-12 ch 12,	abusewhy didnt she call the FBI? they could have tracked the car or something... otherwise nice chapter.
Sinkingboat 2008-02-12 ch 11,	abusei was thinking and this is what booth would have said when he was talking to the mob guy on the phone after the guys said the thing about the handcuffs. "Oh yeah! A friend of mine said that last night. Kind of a weirdo though if you ask me... strange connection with his mom." or something
Sinkingboat 2008-02-12 ch 10,	abuseSo stupid! He's FBI. Where's his back up? You are making booth an idiot and a baby! Agh. I thought you were chaning your tune when you told us what happened when both first got caught but nope... Booth would not have put the jacket on. Booth would have repotred to the FBI what happened. You know the ,quis custodiet ipsos custodes, line? I thought that was funny cause earlier I said the crime family sounded like something outa bataman? Batman actually said that once. Oh and I'm guessing the younger brother booth talked to is the one in charge like the godfather? gina the sister like in scarface.
Sinkingboat 2008-02-12 ch 9,	abuseheld his breath in fear? he was a ranger! come on!
Sinkingboat 2008-02-12 ch 8,	abusebooth is not a baby. he's a killer! come on! he doesnt make deals he kicks ass!

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