Wow this is not only well written but beautiful and I can feel the emotions from Risa. I haven't read any of your sisters work but I think your a pretty good writer so don't compare yourself to her all the time. I bet you two have two totally different styles. Please update when you can.

Wish you would update

It's pretty good. I'm curious for the next ch. Keep upu the good work.

That was a great chapter, can't wait to see what happens next!

Gosh, long update on this. . . Angsty stories take time to write. . . Thanks for the update. . . Deep meanings for Risa! XD

MORE! MORE! (I think Satoshi should dye his hair...it's just too distinctive-what the hell is he thinking anyway?!)

What do you mean this wouldn't satisfy? I therrelly enjoyed this latest installment. This is definitely one of the few stories I'm always thrilled when it gets updated (funnily it seems all those few stories tend to be updated rather irregularly).

The three sections in this chapter I felt were all perfect in keeping the mood intact while being essentially very different in character. Risa's turmoil in the beginning, her friends worries and her talk with Riku again all were very enjoyable and felt very natural, something not many often achieve at this level. This is just a very easy to read story and I enjoy it every time just as much.

For my part, I'm certainly expectant to see how you'll move on with this story and happily it has not let me down yet.

- Jani

I LOVE THE GAME APPLES TO APPLES. My friends and I play it all the time. haha, i love it.
Thanks for the update, and I really hope you keep on writing!

Ooh. Please continue this!

I loved this story! I can't wait 'till you come up with the next chapter! Keep it up and update soon!
-tsv
P.S. Who's your sister on here?

more please ^o^
That was all so lovely!

wow you updated!! i so glad you did! i hope soon that Risa and satoshi talk soon!

YAY! 3 new chapters. I am happy that you finally got over your writers block. I have been starved for new chapters of some stories, and now I have three very good ones. Thank you so much! These were great chapters and entertaining as always. Update soon!

Whoo, a whole three chapters in one go. I'm happy you didn't abandon it as I've quite enjoyed it before.

Again the character interaction is just incredibly easy and fun to read, with nothing seemingly out of place. Particularly the easy swingin' feel in the eighth chapter was real great, or the conversation of Riku and Risa in the seventh. And surprisingly I quite enjoyed the ninth one too. It's hard to write engaging scenes involving sports, but this was quite enjoyable.

Here's hoping that this will eventually be finished and not left unfinished, for I really do enjoy it.

- Jani

Please write more. i'm just dying for some Satoshi/Risa interaction.