love witty french remarks. Translations definitely good thing though (hehe) great chap.

To some it all up, I love this fic.

The pairing is awesome (there seriously aren't enough Marluxia/Larxene stories T_T), your plotlines are good, and the writing is excellent.

So, please continue this fic, for the sake of this poor reader? ^_^

Haha. "Let London Burn" cracked me up. xDD

Good description of their relationship. ^-^

Ah, French. Studied it for six years and I still couldn't understand all of that. xP

Yeah, I really hated how Larxene died too. Puh-lease, Larxene definitely could not get killed as easily as she was killed in the game (well, in my opinion anyways =D)

Well written chapter here. ^_^

Aww, poor Marluxia's jealous. That's sweet. xDD

M...

Ahh, how I long to get inspiration to write a MarLarx I'm not ashamed to put online...

This is good. I didn't notice many grammatical errors.

These are just amazing! I'm irritated that I didn't find this sooner!! I went and saved all of them to my computer and put this on my favorites list! There are just not enough Marluxia and Larxene stories, and here I feel like I'm going to get to read 30! I hope you won't abandon this idea because I'm a huge fan of this!

Oh? Who is this girl?

Short chapter, but I'm still loving it all. :D

I sorta breezed through this chapter. It flowed very nicely. I can certainly see how anyone could be easily swept up into a particularly powerful piece of music... even a Nobody~.

As far as the orchestral references, it seemed to be accurate to me. I wonder what genre they were dancing to?

Yeah, Marly IS a seductive asshole, isn't he... I too am not very good with instruments (played piano once, haven't tried it ever since) so I can't very much criticize the whole musical allegory. Still. Nice job :)

(Psst! Great drabbles, but don't forget to post them in the community!)

Finally, an update!

I agree, it isn't as dazzling as the earlier segments, but it has retained its repulsively addicting story.
Marluxia and Larxene are fabulous.
Your writing style is fabulous.

Always a fan~

Oh, wily Marluxia. You and your crafty methods of winning battles. I love all the comparing and contrasting you do in this one-shot. And the battle itself could be seen as one. Wonderful job.