 bookworm9224 2008-08-06 . chapter 2This is a really good story! Keep up the good work.
One thing, though. How is everyone in Ryoko and Shizuma's life reacting to all this? Also, I'd think Ryoko would be more upset with Shizuma for making her an unmarried mother from a one night stand, but that's only what I think.
Anyway, great job! |