Oh, my goodness! This is positively, sidesplittingly comical! The dialogue is so perfect! And you didn't even need to make it long or explain what was happening or what they were doing. XD The conversations here are so greatly written that you don't even think about that. The personalities are to a T and the conversations are completely realistic for these characters. XD XD Fantastic job, truly! XD This is one of the funniest things I've read on this site. :D

Awesome. Pure awesomeness. WOOHOO! GO NAPOLEON!

WOOOT! WIN!

funny! just add in quotes and it will be awsome:-

this sucks.

this is funny!

hahaha. :D

O my gosh this was hilarious..My friend bobby can do the voice of Napolian and His brother can do kip. we printed it out and di a little show with it. it was hilarious...

Hohohoho, it made me laugh! D

NAPOLEON IS A SEXY BEAST! 'Kay. Thanks. Bye.

"Kip: Gees Napoleon. That was a waste of my time."

Kip, you are so right.

Put quotations for dialogue, it would help smooth the story out. Without putting tags, it's just lazy.

Good day,

AccessDeniedZORS

AHAHAHAH :)

your parents were right! this is the BEST napolean dynamite story ive read so far! HAHAHA!

x)

omfg

i love napoleon and randomness...

this is like the best thing ive read!

its AWESOME!

gosh!

u r a wonderful auther ...for realz!

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love always ...jealousy

i have a couple comments

1. i enjoyed how you potrayed napoleans character

2. i didnt like how at some parts it got confusing

3. you could improve by making the characters more realistic

4. you could have made napolean a little cooler

5. and finally i think that it was an all over good script but make it longer next time

... sorry if i made you feel bad

So random, but I just loved it for some reason!

It actually made my day! Good work! :D

-Jen

Thats really funny keep up the good work