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DUDE! *grumbling* stupid cliffies... I hate them... *louder* FOR the record this story Is AWESOME so far! UPDATE SOON!!

omg! who'd he kill? i HAVE to know!

I understand that Bella doesn't really like Edward any morer, but does she have to be so Mean to Alice? I like Alice!

Awesome Idea! Vivian sounds so cute!! I love Bella's new sisters.

Update soon! I'm loving this so far! :)

He did WHAT? What he heck is wrong with him?

good story. update soon plz

KEEP WRITING THIIS:) ITS GOOD

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O! *shocked silence* ... Definatly didn't see that one comming. Just wow.
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I feel bad for bella ...

Leonard, the one who could read my mind. Wow, such a nice statement. The question still remains a mystery to all of us, how could he read my thoughts when Edward couldn’t. And frankly, it’s at the bottom of my ‘What’s my concerns’ list right now, given my current situation.

As the annoying non-digital clock in the room constantly ticked with each passing second, I kept telling myself that I kissed Leonard on impulse, that I wanted him to be jealous.

But that still doesn’t explain the feeling I had in my heart when my lips touched his. The same feeling you get when you’re about to give an oral report in front of your class and maybe similar to the one when you’re dropping faster than gravity on the Tower of Terror.

Groaning, I placed my head in between my legs, as if that would help me think better. Bella Swan, how did you ever end up with such a messed up life? Sometimes I wonder if someone is behind all of this, like they have the ability to write out a person’s life, and they decided they were going to screw over mine by giving me problem after problem.

Didnt expect that from edward maybe from jasper !!

I…” As Edward was about to say something, the elevator next to us opened, revealing a group of three boys and two girls staring at us with curious eyes. They walked by us, there eyes wandering side-ways to catch even a little glimpse of us.

“You were saying?” I said.

And in a low, somewhat strained voice he said, “I killed someone.”

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I feel bad for bella ...

Leonard, the one who could read my mind. Wow, such a nice statement. The question still remains a mystery to all of us, how could he read my thoughts when Edward couldn’t. And frankly, it’s at the bottom of my ‘What’s my concerns’ list right now, given my current situation.

As the annoying non-digital clock in the room constantly ticked with each passing second, I kept telling myself that I kissed Leonard on impulse, that I wanted him to be jealous.

But that still doesn’t explain the feeling I had in my heart when my lips touched his. The same feeling you get when you’re about to give an oral report in front of your class and maybe similar to the one when you’re dropping faster than gravity on the Tower of Terror.

Groaning, I placed my head in between my legs, as if that would help me think better. Bella Swan, how did you ever end up with such a messed up life? Sometimes I wonder if someone is behind all of this, like they have the ability to write out a person’s life, and they decided they were going to screw over mine by giving me problem after problem.

Didnt expect that from edward maybe from jasper !!

I…” As Edward was about to say something, the elevator next to us opened, revealing a group of three boys and two girls staring at us with curious eyes. They walked by us, there eyes wandering side-ways to catch even a little glimpse of us.

“You were saying?” I said.

And in a low, somewhat strained voice he said, “I killed someone.”

--

Bella is a little kid !!

I had crossed my arms and turned away from his gaze, thinking that if I did make eye contact with him that he would capture me in a hypnotism and make me fall in love with again or something.

And I wasn’t going to let him!

Eventually I got bored standing there, and my neck started to get soar so I sat down at nearby bench and watched as Edward took that as a silent command to go away and dissappeared with the mass of people.

Now I’m sitting here all alone while my family is off having fun with the people who I thought long ago were going to be my future family. They will probably all best friend-like with each other when they get back too!

Great, now I’m starting to sound like a jealous kid who wants everyone just to pay attention to her and only her.

I lifted my head to look up into the gray sky. The sun was still covered by a crowd of clouds and I wondered how Elizabeth was able to keep it up this long.

--

I know that what I hoping for would instantly put me on Santa’s naughty list but I really wished that when the Cullens and my family came back that they would be bickering and just despised each other.

Didnt expect that coming : )

Bella!” Leonard came jogging towards me with a large, white stuff bear in his left arm and transparent plasic bag in the other. “Here, I won you a bear, and a fish.” He held them out while a shy smile was plastered on his face.

From the corner of my eye I saw Edward watching us with jealous eyes. Surprisingly, the little gester from Leonard made me feel a little more than thankful. Instead of the normal hug I would have given him, I leaned up and planted a small kiss on the lips. I felt him stiffen at the contact, he himself was too shocked about what I did.

I looked around me to see everyone staring at us, their faces filled with surprise.