Reviews for Underneath It All
felisse.alexander68 5/11/13 . chapter 3
That was hilarious
Guest 11/13/12 . chapter 25
Please please finish the story I've read it all and it needs an ending
chcdom 10/31/12 . chapter 25
No hiatus! Hiatus is bad. Love this story.
Jac Lag 5/10/12 . chapter 25
I'm so late into the Fuffy ship, lol... I remember watching episodes of the early seasons on TV but never got to finish all episodes, so am not exactly familiar with many of the characters and scenes.. Anyway, am a newbie in reviewing Fuffy fics, but I felt the need to post a comment here coz I love your Faith in your 3 multi-chapt fics.. am hoping you will continue this, but I highly doubt so since you are into other ships and that BtVS is no longer showing, so I'll understand if your interest is no longer here.. :(
Dalin Asher Shongili 12/5/11 . chapter 25
Hey great story! I really like the amazing emotion you put into Faith and Buffy's relationship. It grips me, ya know.
spiritedghost 10/18/11 . chapter 18
Okay that box full of roses with the card of poetry had to come from, wait for it. Wait for it. I am about to say it. Wait for it! THE. IMMORTAL! That was totally worth the wait and you know it...Ghost!
spiritedghost 10/18/11 . chapter 16
OMG, you had Faith call her a Twinkie and she didn't even react to it. LOL. She was so worried about how she would respond to her wanting to see Spike. I think they both need closure, that might have also been a part of why Buffy had the Dreams of The Mayor. Her inner voice, I was so glad Faith made her reason it out. That was brilliant. Go Faithy!
spiritedghost 10/18/11 . chapter 15
That was intensely emotional. That is really all I can say. I mean I loved it. But wow!...Ghost!
spiritedghost 10/18/11 . chapter 14
Holy cow, Batman. Buffy has been shot. That can not be a good thing. Although we can talk about that next chapter let's talk about this part of the chapter instead. When they come down the stairs after having, what, hallway sex and run into the Xan Man. That was priceless I was laughing so hard. I would cut and paste but you know what you wrote so what is the point. That whole interplay with those three was a gem. The fly thing and Xander says, "I know it keeps everything fresh." I thought I would cry I was laughing so hard, you are funny...Ghost! Oh and I bow to the master. (bows) Relish the moment my bowing days are over...
spiritedghost 10/18/11 . chapter 13
(grins because really what else can one do. I am guy who just watched two chicks having an incredible time so yeah I am smiling like a Cheshire cat)I think that and HOT, STEAMY , AND HOT. Sum it up nicely...Ghost!
spiritedghost 10/18/11 . chapter 10
Okay, could they move any slower without going in reverse? (grins) You are starting to kill me here...Ghost!
spiritedghost 10/18/11 . chapter 9
SOMETHING I DON'T KNOW! This might actually be the best chapter yet as far as really getting to know you. I still don't like Robin Woods but then he thought he was going to end up with Faith. He likes to plant seeds of doubt but for each seed the push is on to find out more about the other. Meaning who are Buffy and Faith really? Most complex personalities desperate for love and affection, two sides of the same coin, or perhaps it is true one is a bit darker then the other and yet Light needs the dark in order to survive as Dark needs the Light in order to see clearly. So perhaps opposite sides of the same coin, in perfect balance with each other. One can't survive without the other. (Am I over thinking this?) Probably not! Hell you wrote it, I am just seeing things in a new light. So Brilliant once again...Ghost!
spiritedghost 10/18/11 . chapter 6
So it seems I now remember why I hated Robin Wood's. Let's see the guy is a total DICK! However maybe he needed to be because the result was Buffy and Faith kissed and not once but twice and it was sort of EPIC. Nice no screw that not nice, it was nothing less then Brilliant. (grins ear to ear) Now if he get's in the way feel free to kill him off. (shrugs) What Damon would do it in a heartbeat or Spike would soul or no soul. Interesting point however is this, in TVD, Vampires seem to retain their souls. I am liking that universe more and more. Sorry, did I mention how much I love this story and you better like finish it, because you have worked on it for what 2 years now. (sighs) ...Ghost!
spiritedghost 10/18/11 . chapter 4
Oh Asher, you are so funny. Again you made me laugh at so many moments in this chapter I have tears in my eyes. I was laughing so hard, and of course Willow gave her the best advice of all. I loved the trip down memory lane. I loved when Buffy looks down at her breasts and says, "Hey, they can hear you!" Those moments are what make this story BRILLIANT. Anyone can write, but not everyone has talent and let's face it have you read some of the stories in here? They are dreadful, but still takes guts to post and not everyone has talent, you on the other hand, my new found friend are BRILLIANT! Now I will go and laugh my way through the next chapter and they are going to have sex soon are they NOT? Or do I have to hunt you down and end you, yes that was a very Damon thing to say. Don't blame me blame it on my cross over story. If you read other peoples works you would know what I mean...lol. Later, gator!...Ghost!
spiritedghost 10/18/11 . chapter 3
Okay, I absolutely love this story. It is hilarious. I have actual tears in my eyes from laughing so hard. This whole story is great, brilliant, two thumbs up, if I had a third thumb it would be up. Oh do big toes count? I love Buffy's confusion over her feelings for Faith. She is in love and possibly for the first time in her life she is actually in Love, Love. (Did that make sense?) She has no clue how to handle it? Poor little slayer! Anyways, I promise an in depth review soon as I am prone to do. But right now I want to read. Oh hell here is a preview of what you would get if I was to actually review, review. The scene with Lorne, when he heard her singing without intending to sing for him. That was classic. "Shush, you!" I was laughing so hard I had to read it twice and each time it made me laugh harder. The scene with Andrew, when he notices how she is looking at Faith. When Buffy told Faith they were going to a fancy restaurant soon and she would not let her wear her leathers and Faith said, then I will go naked. Buffy thinks a moment Faith takes a beat and says, "B?" to bring her back from her zoning into space and Buffy replies, "I am picturing it!" There is just so much more. You ended it on her saying to herself, "Stupid feelings!" Such a Buffy thing to say. Perfectly BRILLIANT!...Ghost
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