a tad bit confusing...but other than that it rocked XD i also think it went a little too fast...

I think that this is a pretty good, update soon.

:) I like it a lot. You even sucessfully distracted me from my life right now, which isn't exactly bad . . . more just interesting. Anyhow, I really like the introduction of Chesh\Legacy - she's powerful enough to make things interesting, but not invincible, which is a hard thing to pull off.

Intreasting so far.
Just a note Rolan is not that old, he was the second companion of the last kings own(see Exiles honer for more details)
any way good story keep it up.

Heyla,

Awwww.... *blush* your the one who is writing, you are the one who deserves the comppliments my dear. I think you rock!! Your writing is superb, it excels beyond the horizon!!!

Legacy sure whipped him up didn't she? I Like bad @ss chiks!! Did you think of anything about the monsters?? I hope so..:) you will come up with something scary I bet!! *wiggles eyebrows*

A Legacy all alone... Kinda sad, I mean she has no one, everyone dies.. :( I wonder how they are goingt o fix the land? Do they feed it energy? Or do they heal it like a healer does a wound?
Oh, yeah, I read your other storys, and they rock!! I liked the one about the urban jungle and the guy who wondered about his sanity, I thought those were really cool. They way you cange the perspectives and wonder from their point of view is facinating!

Erp.. Sorry about chattering in your ear... I got carried away with myself... Basicly: I love your story!!! I want you to update as soon as humanely possible so I can review it again!!! (I think I will do it again anyway..) And last but not least... I love the wqay you write, your style....*dreamy smile* I love it!! To bad I can't write that well... Oh well. *shrug*
Lovin it,

Dance :-)

Ha ha ha ehhehehheeheehehhehe!!!!! *maniac giggles* I liked THAT twist. Oh god she thought- *fit of giggles* oh PLEASE please please please please update!?? Please? I really like your story!! *looks at screen sees last update date* WHaT? you haven't updated in in forever!! *crys*

Like this story. Very interisting. Can not wait for the next chapter too be posted.

This is a good story. Please continue with it!

kind of strange, but i like it. can't wait to find out more about that strange lady.

I'm curious, where exactly is this story headed?

a neurotic companion, eh? lol, should be fun :) sorry, i have no suggestions for now, unless "keep writing and posting" could be counted as one :) the part about that new companion being different was great. original. :)

i'm anctious to meet silverleaf, but it's hard to think of a tayledras as so rude and arrogant. but who knows? ha, :) keep writing. good chapter for expalations.

"We'll start tomorrow with different monsters." lol :) great

Wow! What a story so far...I stumbled across this story in sheer boredom, and left with my brain whirling. I can't wait to read the next parts! The characters are good, and I'm glad you had some familiar things in it. There's only one part of the story that isn't thrilling me, and that's Legacy. She just seems a little too good to be true. Rounding her character out a bit more would be nice. I'll check back once in a while to see where this is going!

my kb is broke. Using remote to type. Ugh! Please write more. I loved it and I am very picky! Webtv is very slow connecting so it took a couple of hours to get it to load. Well worth it! More please. Thank you.
Rose