 Kyasurin-Sama 5/21/11 . chapter 1Very, very VERY pretty please continue this? XD |
 mimico909 2/5/11 . chapter 1 Make this longer please loved it! |
 Reibuki Shihaisha 12/3/10 . chapter 1CONTINUE PLEASE! |
 delicate.desires 6/6/10 . chapter 1Cute! |
 crazysmile15 11/2/08 . chapter 1I loved your version of Neji, and Sakura wasn't bad either! Now I want ice cream too! THANK YOU VERY MUCH...arrg! lol! |
 Jenny 8/10/08 . chapter 1 CONTINUE!
...please? |
 Tsuna De Vongola Decimo 1/28/08 . chapter 1CONTINUE! I LOVE YOUR STORIES! DO YOU WANT ME TO COMMIT SUICIDE ALL BECAUSE OF YOU? |
 Aka Zune 9/30/07 . chapter 1 It's pretty good compared to some other stuff I've read, but it seems like you've got a bit of a problem with run-on sentences. Commas help, and you don't have to but so much description in everything. Oh! Here's a thought- try a new sentence all together. Take your time if you want to.
(not a flame or anything, just too lazy to log in : )
(last thing I promise!) There were some grammatical errors. Maybe you could go over and edit? |
 sakura-lizzy 9/13/07 . chapter 1TO CONTINUE DEFINETLY!I LoVED IT PLEASE CONTINUE! |
 SpeedDemon315 8/4/07 . chapter 1Characterization on both Sakura and Neji were accurate and it would be great if this was continued. Though, I completely understand if you think otherwise. |
 Mrs. Story 7/22/07 . chapter 1Yes, Neji was a little far, but Sakura was depicted perfectly. You should certainly continue this story, I like it. |
 Chixalub808 6/18/07 . chapter 1Oh man! That wuz a good story! I think u should continue the thing. Pleasse! Ur welcome! |
 anonymous4ever 6/10/07 . chapter 1please please please make either a sequel or continue! -puppy eyes- pwetty pwease i love the story! |
 Evelyn Menai 6/8/07 . chapter 1you should continue. I believe you could do wonders with this fan fic. and neji was fine. |
 xCrushxChanx17 6/6/07 . chapter 1YES. I think you should continue on. I do. I do. |