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amy
2009-12-11 . chapter 1
I liked it and I cried at the end. Sad stories made me cry!
invisible29
2009-04-08 . chapter 1
AW! That was so cute! I loved it
lucario
2009-04-03 . chapter 1
that was was kinda lame
Rachel
2009-04-02 . chapter 1
It's very creative and stuff! nice job
TheFifthCharmedOne
2009-03-28 . chapter 1
aw! so cute! loved it!
Kimmiko T.
2009-02-16 . chapter 1
I love the Someone's Watching Over Me story!
It's so cute&sweet! What would be better than that is to keep on writing this one so people can see them tell everyone they're together. Wouldn't that be great?
I would like to be friends.
Ja'ne!
stanley hickman
2009-02-10 . chapter 1
Why did you make Dawn slap Ash? It was completely unnecessary and made absolutely no sense at all. Then you made both of them confess their love for each other, kiss, and fall asleep in each other's arms right after she slapped him. That also made absolutely no sense at all. And you made Ash and Dawn's love for each other come out of nowhere. And where was Pikachu after Brock left the hospital to go back to the hotel? Did he go with Brock, go with Ash to Dawn's hospital room, or sit and wait in the waiting room in the hospital for Ash? ALL of these things were never explained. Please learn how to explain things better and make necessary/logical things happen in your future stories, if you plan on writing more stories in the future.
Dawn Rules
2008-12-23 . chapter 1
Beautifull! i creid XD! Loved it soo much XD
HarpieAna
2008-02-06 . chapter 1
Aw that was SO sweet! You're AWESOME! Though Misty isn't bad too but none the same.
Sar T.
2007-12-15 . chapter 1
Hi! Me again. Don't know if u got my last email, but if u didnt oh well. I like this story as well as all ur others. Ur stories r really sweet. But anyways, I'm still working on getting fanfictions up, but I cant figure it out, even with help. Well that's because I'm probably slow & no nothing about uploading, downloading & stuff like that. I think I know how u can give me ur email address, if u want. If u email me, put ur email address in the middles of ur message or whatever. Anyways, still love this story. write me soon, okay.

Write Soon, Sar T.
FatBoySlim
2007-08-23 . chapter 1
great story! now im motivated to write pearlshipping stories..and you gave me a great idea for my first one! ill let you know!
WemOfHyperLeaf
2007-08-20 . chapter 1
That was very good!
Ash x Dawn master
2007-07-06 . chapter 1
That was really good,espescially the ending.please write some more like this one in the future.^-^
Blader8
2007-06-27 . chapter 1
you are a great writer, and hope to see more great things from you =)
Kagomekillskikyo
2007-05-31 . chapter 1
I love Hillary Duff.
That was so beautiful. you are a really good writer
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