 Sonia120462 2009-09-22 . chapter 8rele good! update soon!! |
 Merky15 2009-01-08 . chapter 8Love, love, love ,love, love this fanfic. Everytime i try to read a Sesshomaru fanfic the author usually gets him all wrong. YOu pinnede his character perfectly, and I love the relationship between INu and Sess. All I can say is that I can't wait for you to update. SO, please do. The only one thing I didn't like is the Sesshomaru rin thing, but that's only my opinion. It is one of the best Fanfic's I read in a long time, and I need more! Great Job :) |
 Alis rein silvervine 2008-12-16 . chapter 8This is a lovely piece of work! The way the brothers interact is absolutely amusing :D
can't wait for more chapters!
and you have a wonderful style of writing, completely natural! |
 AncientHistory 2008-10-23 . chapter 8cool. update soon please. |
 lil joker 2008-09-05 . chapter 8i like this im wondering what else Inuyasha is going to have to learn and what Sesshomoru is going to have to learn to |
 aidan bard 2008-08-25 . chapter 8I must say, I'm hooked. The story is well paced and beleiveable. kEeps up with the canon and more -- I'd love to see another chapter of this soon. I see you haven't updated since May. I hope you'll continue with this.
~Ai |
 CatLover260 2008-08-23 . chapter 8I just recently found this story thatnks to IYFG nomination. I find it very intersting the way the two are starting to build a relationship with each other. I am curious as to where it is going to go. I am not surprised with Inuyasha's determination to wait for Kagome, that reunion is goiong to be interesting to see, especially if Inuyasha and Sesshomaru actually become friends by that time. This slow change in attitudes from both of them makes the story more real. They are not going to instantly like each other, but there is the basis of a relationship in the fact that Inuyasha couldn't kill Sesshomaru by using the Wind Scar's full power against him and Sesshomaru shows a tolerance of Inuyasha and even tries to help somewhat when Inuyasha went full demon and Sesshomaru help subdue him so Kagome could give Tessaiga to its rightful owner. It should be interesting to see how others react to the relationship, especially Jaken. I am looking forward to seeing how this story progresses. |
 Star-Struck Inu 2008-08-20 . chapter 8Aw this chapter is so cute! Just a quick question. A lot of stories that i read that are post-naraku in this section shows that Sesshomaru gets his left arm back. Does Sesshomaru have two arms in this story or one? |
 ANBUTrysts 2008-08-14 . chapter 8I like this story very much. It's quite easy to believe that things might happen this way. How they respond to eacother is perfect. Update soon please! |
 AluminumMuse 2008-08-10 . chapter 2Ooh, I like this one. Clever and well written. Sesshomaru's voice in the narration is cold and aristocratic, just as it should be. You have found just the right balance of in character dialogue and mild humor at our dearest friend’s expense without ruining the believability (is that even a real word? Maybe realisticness would work better…) or getting in the way of the plot’s progress. I look forward to reading the rest of this. |
 .001Kamikakushi 2008-08-01 . chapter 8keh, i'm not that far in the manga, don't know anything about Sesshoumaru's swords. If he has a new one after breaking one and throwing the other.
must keep up. Hope you update soon, it's really unpredictable.
they begin their way toward friendship huh?
they're so IC your story seems to be a part of the actual serie. |
 .001Kamikakushi 2008-08-01 . chapter 6gya! angst for Rin!. As much as i'm not fond of SessKag, i don't really like Sessrin. (SessInu either, well it seems i just don't like anything ^^")
However, the way you pictured their affection is just too touching. I nearly cried with Rin's death.
In fact, it's good Rin's in here. there's no way Sesshoumaru would suddenly think he likes his brother or anything like that. I love the slow acceptance they're building. |
 .001Kamikakushi 2008-08-01 . chapter 5okay, correction, the kids from "Miroku and co".^^"
I like the last sentence of this chap.
Your story is kinda funny too^^
haha, dealing with inu youkai is really convenient when writing smut. (not that your story is smut but we have some "suggestive" moments. |
 .001Kamikakushi 2008-08-01 . chapter 4they're all IC so far, and that's good. I like how you show Sesshoumaru's acceptance with little gesture, you give everything a meaning.
You don't write things only for your convenience, or at least, it's not that obvious =)
really good so far.
you didn't show Inuyasha interacting with Miroku and co though. I can hardly picture Inuyasha leaving without a word. |
 IcelandAnimeGirl 2008-07-18 . chapter 8I love this story :D It is very well written, fun to read and exciting! x3 I can't wait 'till next chapter! Please update as soon as you can! :D |