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| Huh? 2008-09-23 ch 29, anon. | abuse“Well, I’ve been away from Alvida for more than 9 months, right?” he asked, calculating the days in his head, “And she doesn’t have a baby. And she never did, so... I musn't have one.” he nodded, answering his own question. Sanji tried to keep his face neutral, not wanting to alert Zoro of the knowledge that he had accidentally just told them something he had been so adamant to keep a secret. “R-Right…” he choked out, glancing to Nami, seeing his expression of masked horror mirrored on her face. They had always suspected something like this may have happened, but now Zoro had unwittingly and so innocently confirmed their suspicions. Thankfully, Luffy hadn’t seemed to put one and one together. Obviously, if Zoro was worried about Alvida having had his baby, then at some point, he’d have had to have had sex with her. Obviously, it wouldn't have been by choice either... Sanji swallowed back the lump in his throat, forcing a smile and patting Zoro on the back, forcing his voice to remain steady. Now was not the time to be angry. “Right!” he repeated, smirking a little shakily, “So, now that you two know all about babies and stuff, why don’t you head up to your rooms?” Sanji and Nami both released loud sighs. That… had been difficult. To think, after all their coaxing, and small intimate talks with Zoro, the teen would just let the information slip like that. And from the looks of it, he was completely unaware that he had. Both were just grateful Zoro was okay. Though he was still scarred, he seemed so much better than he had been before. He had even said Alvida’s name! Sighing, they moved to the living room to discuss their plans for the future. Why did Sanji and Nami get so flustered? Why did Sanji almost get mad? Did Zoro say something bad? |
| Rasei 2008-07-21 ch 1, | abuseI like it so far. It's well written. |
| O r i g i n a l1 2008-07-02 ch 35, | abuseDesperately waiting for DD2!! |
| Silverchild of the winds 2008-06-24 ch 2, | abuseI am commenting on the authors note above. the thing you said abotu Lord of the rings didn't affect me. I don't like lord of the rings, I like this story. |
| Silverchild of the winds 2008-06-23 ch 35, | abusewow! you guys are good. Somehow Luffy doesn't seem all that ooc considering where he is coming form. though I worrl y about the torture you are going to put them thought this tiem. You are bothe mean to this pair in the vast majority of your stories. |
| Heart in a Headlock 2008-06-21 ch 35, | abuseKyahh!! Stupid Garp... 'cmon! Get him, Zoro!! Wonderful story; you really do a fantastic job with emotions! |
| Darkyu 2008-06-19 ch 35, | abuseThat was so sad! NO! Gramps MUST have left some kind of clue for them to know at least what happened to him! This is going to be awful to Luffy, AND to Zoro... wait a minute, TO ALL OF THEM! no! You two are evil! (That's why I like you both! ^^) I hope that they won't take too long to find Luffy so he and Zoro can be together! Thank you both, girls! I'm dieing to keep in check with your stories! |
| Allys777 2008-06-14 ch 35, | abuseUmm, Hell Yes I'm screaming! Stupid Fucking Garp!! I'd kick him, but he scares me, so yeah... *whistles*. I have no idea what to expect but I'm kind of excited. I'm guessing the next part of the story is gonna give us a lot more info on Luffy XD. YAY!! I wanna see how Ace and Shanks and possibly Dragon fit into this. I also wanna see how Luffy settles back into his role :(. And this new stronger side of Zoro is also intriguing *huggles him*. I really do love this story and I have to thank you both for writing it. ♥ |
| Allys777 2008-06-14 ch 34, | abuseOMG! *Happy victorious dancing* GO LUFYY! XD XD LOL, I'm so freaking happy!! I love that a little bit of his manga personality just jumped out there! I LOVE that Luffy! The strong one who can dish out just as much as he can take. This whole chapter was great fun. I'm sorry it took so long for me to get to it. I loved all the happy feelings and even the end with Alvida ended up more good than distressing. *huggles u both* Oh and I'm sorry Plushie about the giving it away comment. I didn't mean it like it was a bad thing. I was just really excited that they were going to the circus and I think my tact deserted me *toes the ground*. Forgive me!? *puppy dog eyes* |
| crystalbluefox 2008-06-01 ch 35, | abusecan't wait 'till DD2 apearse. You two just rock the place, I LOVE your stories and enjoys them everytime... Take care then until next time ;) |
| Iina-chan 2008-06-01 ch 35, | abuseThank you guys for writing this fic ^^ I can't wait for the next part, good luck you guys with writing it, I'm sure we all DD-fans stick with you till the end ^^ Fight on you guys! I'll do fanart for you ^^ |
| Kiari1112 2008-05-30 ch 35, | abusemehmadbvkugea *other random giberish* ok now that i got that out Oh i hate cliffhangers their so cliffy...and hangingy... theyr evil there thats more sencible. but wow i keep reading this and its so... dark... mind you I like it so theres no way thats a complaint luffy though... i keep wondering how many more characters may be introduced/brought back in and sometimes I cant help but wonder what you can do next but... wow I really didnt see this coming I totally though that garp was Kuro from earlier when he was first reintroduced(the 1st 1 or 2 paragraphs) Im really looking forward to this... and just got a non-zolu adict totally interested in reading this, tahnkfully he puts up with me so Im sure he`ll still enjoy it. well i cant wait for the next update...or story i guess...I think I should like print out my favorite stories and take them on trips with me... would that be weird? |
| Toraus 2008-05-29 ch 35, | abuseI found the story the other day, and just finnished it today. I really love it! ^-^ |
| inufire 2008-05-29 ch 35, | abuseno luffy! cant wait for the next chapter |
| Samps432 2008-05-28 ch 35, | abusewoo!! two chapters in a week!! yay!! interesting twist having luffy kidnapped i hope zoro figures it out soon and luffy's alright |