Well...its sweet yes, but I also fear that its not safe. This type of thing so easily leads to sex, so I wouldn't do it or encourage it myself. Particular since Ed and Winry are young and not married.

ah, that has got to be one of my favorite scenes in the manga. i like how you ended it, since the original version didn't go that far into it.

I loved this. it was so sweet my teeth ached afterwards. I'm enjoying the sort of open style of your writing, where time feels a little more fluid. I like how the storytelling doesn't have to feel so point to point. Thanks for sharing.

Nicely done!

Very, very sweet.

I liked it but it still seemed EDWINish ( and not thats that's bad or anything, edwin forever) very good hope to read more!

I like all the detail, it give colorful characters!

Sweet little EdWin moment ! I wish this had really happened in the manga.