So...wow...this is amazing...the way you portray them is absolutely outstanding...I have great respect for you now...farewell ::dissappears in flash of black fire::

Wow...

I'm one of those 'usual fangirls'...I loved it. The whole flow of the story, and I agree, it is epic.

I read a lot of mythology, and that would've fit Right into any book I've ever read. I love the portrayal of both, very well done.

Once again, wow, and great job.

Definitely on my Faves list.

Amazingly well written, not your stereo-typical fanfic. I enjoyed the symbolism, and even the spoken words weren't cheesy or overdone at all~ beautiful

o.o Epic.

So epic that I had to read it twice to get the full impact. It's a very nontraditional look on the Axel/Saix history... but once one gets into it, it's really pretty awesome. I liked the pagan imagery of the first and last sections; the eternal chase is very old-Gods-ish, and it made the whole thing very iconographic, which is, I gather, what you were going for. Nice effect; even if it won't win any popularity awards among the usual Axel fangirls, in its own unique way it shines.

Wow... great job!