That was so SAD but it was AWESOME I LOVED IT

THANKS:D

Wow... amazing story. Really, breathtaking. It makes me feel guilty for reading these stories because I've seen all the episodes but do not remember them at all. Oh, well, this story was great nonetheless. Very moving. Descriptions were perfect. Keep writing!

i really liked this! excillent for english not being your native language. english is mine and i can't even write this well! my gosh you make me jealous. anywho, you need to write some more stories cuz i want to read them.

Interesting story. Very good writing - quite descriptive. It's also very impressive if English is not your native language, because the English was great. I had a little trouble understanding exactly what was happening at the end... was Wilson hanging off the bridge and House grabbed him? Anyway, it was well done.

I really liked this story! That was one of the most touching moments in the entire series, and I probably would have cried if House hadn't answered. I would be totally interested in being your beta, if you want me to. I have a decent background in English composition, and am a paramedic and a pre-med student, so I'm good with the medical stuff. However, I'm lousy with dialogue. Let me know, and keep writing!

good job! :) Keep up the hard work :)

God and peace

Vanessa :)

For someone who speaks a language other than English primarily, this is amazing! Actually, it's amazing anyhow! Great job.

If you would like a beta, I'd be happy to help. English is my first language and I'm fairly addicted to "House". Let me know if you are interested!