Not bad... Tucson, though, not Tuckson. And (in the supplementals, granted) it's stated that Aki's parents died when Aki was quite young, and she was raised by an aunt.

Not a bad little vignette, though. I much like the idea of the Phantom exerting a bit of conscious influence of its own.

This is a cool story. You get inside Aki's feelings, and I like that. Also, thank you for writing a fanfic for "Final Fantasy: The Spirits Within." I think that film gets little recognition.

To be honest, I don't have a clue what this story is about. But I really liked the description. Especially the first line. And Gray sounded vaguely cool. Whoever the heck he is.

I don't understand why the Phantom didn't sing at all. And were was Christine and Raoul? Did he kill them too? You definitely should have had more singing. Or was the Phantom singing "Its the Fear" song?

Mary

P.S. Haa haa just joking