DX I actually feel sorry for Zant. Just a little.

Wow. That was a nearly perfect little piece of Zant Twilight Heaven. ^^ I would love to see Zant/Midna around; I'm in the process of writing a 'fic about them, actually. I love your portrayal of the Twilight Realm; it's totally believable, and his punishment really gave some insight into Zant's appearance. No wonder he had those threadlike things in his mouth in the game. I loved this. I think I might just go read Twilight Messenger!

-Ducky

Awesome! Graphic, but still awesome! The only thing that got me was the formatting. This site it the whole width of my screen and the paragraph describing the lip stitching is really really long and my eyes wandered slightly at one point, but thats just the nature of the beast I suppose!

Bloody good!

I really enjoyed this. It was descriptive, and it kept my attention. You do have several grammatical errors, however they weren't big enough to detract very much from the story. Do you plan on writing more for this one?