 iheartkenji 2008-12-21 . chapter 2UPDATE!! :) |
 A little bit sonic 2008-11-02 . chapter 1"Wait, that wasn't a fantasy. That happened, yesterday. I begged him to stop, and he said he didn't speak Mop."
Well, that was just genius!
I DO love this fic. |
 Bells of Tomorrow 2008-05-11 . chapter 2Holy crap, this is hilarious! I'd definitely be interested in seeing more. :) |
 Electriclady8807 2008-02-28 . chapter 2This was hysterical! I can just imagine it happening XD
Are you continuing the '5 Things' or is this just a one shot? Because I would love to read more! |
 Witty-Kate 2008-01-30 . chapter 2LMAO that is funny1 |
 CheetahLiv 2008-01-12 . chapter 2This is so amazingly perfect! You have JD and Cox's characters down pat! You have to update this, please!! |
 rogueandkurt 2007-11-09 . chapter 2Wow! This is fantastic characterization!! JD and Dr Cox are perfect, in personality, dialogue, and interaction! Absolutely spot-on. And the humor is so 'Scrubs' you've actually got me wondering if you're a renegade NBC writer... Seriously, amazing job. The only problem I can see is that you haven't updated in, like 6 months!! Where's the love? There are so few phenomenal writers out there, especially for Scrubs. Please don't leave me hanging!!
I'd really love to read more!
Keep Smiling! ;)
rogueandkurt |
 Takoon 2007-06-14 . chapter 2Hot damn, this is amazing. There's nothing I can see to change; no typos, grammar errors, etc., and you have the two of them perfectly in character. Your sense of humor also meshes very well with the Scrubsverse.
It would be wonderful to see this continued, if you're ever so inclined. |
 Khronos 2007-05-19 . chapter 2 *gasp* You did not just write an in-character Cox and JD?? Ah, you did!! Yayness. There where lines where I practically saw them say the lines in the show. I'd hug you if I knew you as a real person and can judge whether that's appropriate. |
 xenvyXmaliceXattentionx 2007-05-15 . chapter 2This is really really good! You have the character's personalities down pat man! |
 black lady knight 2007-05-14 . chapter 2more please |
 trek-grrrl 2007-05-13 . chapter 2Another great chapter. I'm hoping there'll be more. I saw your profile and I know you asked for some con-crit, but I honestly can't think of a thing to change. Nothing. It's ab-fab. I normally disregard stories in present tense, so the fact I read this at all is amazing. It was easier for me, being a narration from JD. I totally laughed out loud with the Todd going into the locker room and Perry going, "Speaking of which." That was PERFECT and oh-so-Coxie. |
 trek-grrrl 2007-05-13 . chapter 1Love it! I'm hoping for more. I'll read chapter two in a bit, gotta run. You said it's about five things? Is that a challenge somewhere? I'd love to participate in it, sounds extremely fun. You've got Perry down perfectly, and JD's narration as well. Wonderful spelling and grammar too, very nice. Adding to story alert so I don't miss a single word. Love the subtle JD/Cox too. |
 Therm 2007-05-13 . chapter 2 Just fantastic. Great characterisations, you were very authentic in JD's head and Dr Cox was also spot on.
I can't even think of a bad thing to say, no improvements to be made- your bang on here.
Oh, actually, there is one small thing that could make this better... more chapters! |
 Tifsuz 2007-05-13 . chapter 2 This is hilarious - and the characterizations are great. More please! |