I was glad to see an update and the storyline is really good.It's original and has a lot of potential. It would be a shame just to let it go.

The unfinished end? Are you seriuously ending it like that?

this story is interesting. very different from the stories i read about jessie and katie. keep updating. thanks.

I'm happy to see that you added another chapter. I was starting to think we'd never see any more for this story.

Welcome back!I like this chapter and I'm glad you didn't give up on this story.

Like the others who have reviewed your work here, I am waiting for more.I think I am in pretty good company because those who came before me are good writers too.Keep up the good words.

Maybe I was a little harsh in my recent review..sorry. I like that your trying to bring something new to this category. I can't wait to see how Jessica tries to mend Kate's broken heart. She has it bad for her ex lol!

they havent even met yet and theres already good chemistry! pms so i can see hw they react upon seein eachother!

This still a decent story. SInce it's AU universe I guess that's why you made the White Sox World Champions. Maybe my memory is bad, but I don't remember them winning a World Series lately.

Great start! it could b very interesting to see where this story goes! PMS

I tuned in to the serie during the GSA storyline was being featured, and I had no idea who played Sarah. Well, today I watched some of the clips from Tough Love to the series finaly to comprehend each of the characters for the fanfiction I'm writing. I learned that Lizzy Caplan played Sarah, and her character is much like the characters that Lizzy Caplan had played in the past. I really can't imagine her being the hearthbreaker to someone who's "popular", as Katie Singer's character is described to be. Anyway, interesting plot line, and I can't wait to see where your story goes. Keep writing!

This is an original start. Katie is normally the heartbreaker between her and Sarah. I would like to see this one be continued.