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| lindsay 2008-04-04 ch 1, anon. | abuseaw, this is so so great. its heartbreaking but so great to see them so close to see them so emotionally connected. loved it. |
| raph 2007-05-16 ch 1, anon. | abuseloved it...I really could feel the emotion in there, loved the last setence too... |
| light-stick 2007-05-13 ch 1, | abuseWell... sad. Not VERY sad, but sad. Well writted though, I loved the breathing thing. Ida:-) |
| Zille 2007-05-13 ch 1, | abuseAwh very sad...took me a while to realise what it was about, but once I did I loved it! |
| MinorChords 2007-05-12 ch 1, | abuseaw...i was practically in tears by the end. At first I thought that they were talking about their relationship but then I realized that it was about their unborn child. I love the title "It only Hurts When I Breathe" and the whole concept behind it. Wonderful Job! |
| Jen 2007-05-12 ch 1, anon. | abuseThis is great! Keep up the good work!! |
| hersheygal 2007-05-12 ch 1, | abuseThat was very sweet and sad. I really liked it! :) |