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Reviews For: It Only Hurts When I Breathe

lindsay
2008-04-04
ch 1, anon.
abuseaw, this is so so great. its heartbreaking but so great to see them so close to see them so emotionally connected. loved it.
raph
2007-05-16
ch 1, anon.
abuseloved it...I really could feel the emotion in there, loved the last setence too...
light-stick
2007-05-13
ch 1,
abuseWell... sad. Not VERY sad, but sad. Well writted though, I loved the breathing thing.

Ida:-)
Zille
2007-05-13
ch 1,
abuseAwh very sad...took me a while to realise what it was about, but once I did I loved it!
MinorChords
2007-05-12
ch 1,
abuseaw...i was practically in tears by the end. At first I thought that they were talking about their relationship but then I realized that it was about their unborn child.

I love the title "It only Hurts When I Breathe" and the whole concept behind it. Wonderful Job!
Jen
2007-05-12
ch 1, anon.
abuseThis is great! Keep up the good work!!
hersheygal
2007-05-12
ch 1,
abuseThat was very sweet and sad. I really liked it! :)
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