Bravo! Well done! I loved it! I can't wait to read the sequel :D keep up the excellent work!!

Wow! LOL My gosh... So far this sequel is beyong intriguing! My gosh; Dax sure is a harsh Captain... Jeez... I look forward to reading more :)

Enjoyable as always. I hope we see a wedding and an end to the badness in Ichebs mother.

Lisa

ooh i love it, that was such a cute ending. i am looking forward to the next story! Please keep on writing, your an awesome writer!1

I LOVE IT, i like that Naomi told Neelix that she could do it herself, beucase well we all know she can lol! Icheb and Naomi rock forever, keep on writing ill keep reviewing! (finals next week busy times ill try to get the chappie to you soonish if i can)!

you just have to update!

sad, neelix is being pushy but i guess where he is coming from it seems riht. Im glad that Icheb is standing his ground, but he should jsut tell him look give me a while to forgive you, or something. im excited for the next chappie, please keep on writing ill keep on reviewing! (oh yea the chappie is done, i am jsut reading it over and over so that way waht i send you is my final version)!

i heart it, that was cool. i like that neelix didnt freak out, but i dont really think thats his right too, now maybe her dad would but not neelix. i am very excited for the next chappie, hopefully your computers dont keep crashing! (haha my chappy is getting there, i knwo i keep saying it but its SO CLOSE)!

UPDATE!

I quickly read this story and its predecessor the other day. How lovely! Just enough humor and tensions to make it a really interesting story - and a well-written romance not over-full of bunny-stuffing fluff. I love the reunions between the Voyager crew, especially the storytelling (something often awkward on the TV show that you manage to make, well, a bit less... contrived?). I've enjoyed reading this immensely and can't wait to see how it all falls out at the end. Keep up the great work!

aw they are so darn cute, aw! I love n and i they are so darn cute together! Haha, Neelix haha, ek hopefully he wont go crazy protective on her, who knows!! KEEP WRITING ILL KEEP REVIEWING! (chappie is almost complete, a page or two to go)

omg omg omg omg omg omgomg omg, i love it! This is such a good story, omg. I love the way that you explained how it happened. and then naomi and icheb at the end made me smile. PLEASE KEEP ON WRITING ILL KEEP REVIEWING! (i am wwriting the chappie, trying to figure out where to put the flashback or end of it, soon it will get to you!! thnx)

I'm glad that Naomie should be okay...hope Icheb & Leucon can patch things up. Happy writing!

aah interesting, very interesting i thought those might muck something up. please keep writing, it will be cool to see naomi and neelix back in action and then he sees her grown up with her icheb, eehh it will be GREAT! PLEASE KEEP ON WRITING ILL KEEP REVIEWING!

interesting chapter