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Mrs. Donald Flack Jr.
2008-08-22
ch 3,
abuseI'm getting bored just waiting for the next chapter. I'm actually watching all the seasons on my comp when I wait for the next chapter. Please please please continue.
Blair.The.Adorable
2007-10-01
ch 1,
abuseHey thanks! that was an off the bat story. Have you read in the rain?
kaitlyn143
2007-09-04
ch 3,
abusehey this is great.you should write more
knightdeathandthedevil
2007-06-10
ch 3,
abuseLove it! =D
Can't wait for more!
Soccer-Bitch
2007-06-09
ch 3,
abusecool chapter.
Riccarda
2007-06-09
ch 1,
abuseI've got to agree with "Teebeutel": These German lines are extremely bad. Did you use one of these online translators?
Soccer-Bitch
2007-05-18
ch 2,
abuseawesome chapter. i loved it. can't wait for more. ^_^
mabelreid
2007-05-18
ch 2,
abuseI hope that no gets a gun pulled on them, but then again it might be a great way to teach the commisioner a lesson if one of them got hurt on duty.

Still liking Maddy and so does Flack I think
mabelreid
2007-05-18
ch 1,
abuseI like Maddy, she's great. And yes Flack can get really scary looking when he's ** off.
meadow567
2007-05-13
ch 1,
abuseI like this story so far. I can't wait to read more. :)
Teebeutel
2007-05-13
ch 1,
abuseHey ho - well the story is good but i have to say - the german is really really really bad - ok im comming from austria , and my english is very bad but i try ^^
if you want to you can send me your textes and i´ll translate in german! but just if you want to :)
i don´t know if my e mail adress stands here anywhere so - ,
i would love to help you because.. the german is .. woah .. sry ^^
Soccer-Bitch
2007-05-12
ch 1,
abuseit's a good start for a story. i hope that you continue it. ^_^
LaLa-036
2007-05-12
ch 1,
abuseAwesome! I love your character of Maddy and your Flack and Mac were spot on. Update soon!
redbess
2007-05-12
ch 1,
abusePlease Continue!! I love a good Flack/oc story!
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