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lynzyb
2009-11-07 . chapter 10
I've read this story a few times now and have never left a review. *feels bad*

A -fantastic- story which is very well written. I love the 'renaissance' theme and how the plot eventually falls into place.

My favourite line of the fic came when Raph asked Mikey why he can be so optimistic all the time...Mikey's response is just fab...

“Look bro. Pain and suffering is inevitable but misery is optional.”

A great outlook to life, and very Mikey-like. :-)
Autumnights
2009-10-25 . chapter 10
That was exceptional. You don’t get many stories like that on this site. I am thoroughly impressed. You gave the enemy substance to stand on, kept everyone in character, and shocked us all with such an intricate and well thought out plot. Definitely one for the favorites.
heyheyhey
2009-09-03 . chapter 10
u must've looked up alot of dead guys. lol

its a great story, nice job
Cocomon
2009-07-12 . chapter 1
You made me cry bad at the end, and that's a achievement on your part, considering how hard it is for me to cry. This whole story- everything about it- was absolutly wonderful. The emotions, the characters, the story and the fights... you deserve a cookie. No, a whole box! Your whole Cookie factory!! This story is so awsome!
nightowl247
2009-07-01 . chapter 9
I LOVE THIS STORY, it is so creative, one error though; Mikey's eyes are blue. I wouldn’t say anything except that his eyes being different from the others just further shows how unique and special Mike is, which (I believe anyway) is the point of any character centered fic. Anyway other than that no complaints! Really great story, it was so creative. I’m just amazed at how you tied everything together so masterfully!! Fantastic work!!
finem
2009-04-25 . chapter 10
Loved so hard. Because Mikey is so lovable! You did such a great job handling their family dynamic. I loved every moment. Thank you! XD
naruke3176
2008-12-29 . chapter 10
this was a great story. in the last 2 chapters i cryed. littaly. i would nominate this for an awoard if there was one. i thank you for taking the time to write this.
crystalbladedragon
2008-11-16 . chapter 10
aw, that was a really good fic!

awesome job and i love their protectiveness over mikey, so cute hehe love it!!
PIRATEofHOGWARTS
2008-07-25 . chapter 10
I LOVED IT SO MUCH
SO SWEET OH I LOVED IT

just wanted to let you know
Films By AJ
2008-05-30 . chapter 1
Okay so if you're planning to write a sequel for this story, PLEASE tell me! because it's one of the best stories I've read so far.
Dragon34
2008-05-25 . chapter 10
Oh wow, this was so good I read it all in one sitting. Now my bum hurts but my mind is happy! happy that Mikey lived and happy that you're such a good writer. I think I had tears in my eyes at some points. Definately going into my favorites. Thanks for writing.
Juniperbreezie
2008-05-04 . chapter 9
Very cool fic. Loved it.
Tatsumaki-sama
2008-03-24 . chapter 10
This was unbelievably, absolutely amazing! I loved it! From the many references to the Renaissance geniuses and the dates to Murphy's Laws at the beginning of each chapter to the brotherly moments to the robots and villains (Dr X still freaks me out) to realizing how much Mikey means to them to the plan to make Leo, Raph and Don fight Mikey without realizing it in order to "save" Mikey ... simply everything in this story. It was all written so wonderfully and beautifully. Great job!
morning sun
2008-03-05 . chapter 10
“Hey, if anything can go wrong it will. Murphy’s Law’s a bitch ain’t it?”

Oh, that was defiantly my favorite line. :)

This was awesome, I absolutely adored it. Everything was just... dare I say perfect? All the personalities, the realism (well, as real as you can get with mutant turtles), the natural flow of the story. It was great. This is defiantly one of my personal favorites; you should try your hand at some more TMNT fic’s.

I especially loved the Casey appearance. I don’t know why, it just stuck with me though. Must have been the dialogue. Each word was being directly spoken by Casey in my mind. I must have been channeling him or something. And I like that he went with Donny, you never see the two of them together enough.

A really, REALLY, wonderful fic. Thanks for the entertainment!
IXIAnubiaIXI
2008-02-17 . chapter 10
I have read this over and over again and love it so much! I hope to see more TMNT from you cause ya do it so well!
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