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narutolovesme
2007-12-11 . chapter 1
oh whatever giggle is so fluff
but i did like the story it made me laugh
KantanaAmaya
2007-09-23 . chapter 1
Heh, he ran into a tree. Sounds like something I would do, lol. ^_^
i'd even wait in the rain
2007-07-04 . chapter 1
i luff this fic hehe but you know that already
Strudel Ninja
2007-06-29 . chapter 1
I guess he can see pretty well.

Love the fluff. Probably more than angst. Le ghasp!

School sucks. But thankfully, I won't have to start until September! Yay! And how the heck are you in Algebra 2? I'm not even 14 yet, and I'm still trying to catch up in Algebra 1 so I'm not behind in Geometry next year... jeez, you must be smart...

Flib, you're amazing.

-Strudel
Fiona12690
2007-06-12 . chapter 1
Gah! I loved it and it was cute too. Sasuke going overprotective while still getting angry is amazing!
-Rogue
Brittany
2007-05-29 . chapter 1
That was cute, and about who will laugh at you:
No one, I think you will be beautiful in your dress.



. . . Or maybe one. But you won't notice.
xD
karierte
2007-05-29 . chapter 1
Another fic to go into a C2
peoy
2007-05-20 . chapter 1
it was good but i wish it was longer.
Kaikouken
2007-05-13 . chapter 1
No Kishimoto-sensei is a 19 year old girl, partially blind, chocolate addict, who pimps out almost painfully stupid SasuNaru fiction and has no life whatsoever. XDD

Anyway *whacks you on the head* stop calling your writing skills mediocre. They are awesome, you have the talent and potential to become a great writer.

This story was fluffy and sweet, a delightful and refreshing change from the usual SasuNaru stories. That is what I like best about your writing, they are so refreshing and cute! ^_^

You make the characters pretty much IC and that is awesome. Naruto is really hard to write! Anyhow, this was more or less plotless but, still it made me giggle.

It was cute, really. The last part made me grin like an idiot.

Your stories have such a nice feel, be proud!

And on a side note, since I always do seem to talk a lot, I wish you luck for the formal dress thingie. I hope no one laughs at you XDD

Great one shot! ^_~
Lovely Spell
2007-05-12 . chapter 1
nice i enjoyed this one...poor naruto though... *tree*
oblivion keyblade
2007-05-12 . chapter 1
Umm, wtfh? why didn't you say it was yaoi? I hate the Naruto Sasuke pairing. ew. Other than that, it's a start to a somewhat good story, of course without the freaking yaoi crap. again, ew.
Tama Saga
2007-05-12 . chapter 1
You blind asshole, add a yaoi sign.

Puke.
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