 narutolovesme 2007-12-11 . chapter 1oh whatever giggle is so fluff
but i did like the story it made me laugh |
 KantanaAmaya 2007-09-23 . chapter 1Heh, he ran into a tree. Sounds like something I would do, lol. ^_^ |
 i'd even wait in the rain 2007-07-04 . chapter 1i luff this fic hehe but you know that already |
 Strudel Ninja 2007-06-29 . chapter 1I guess he can see pretty well.
Love the fluff. Probably more than angst. Le ghasp!
School sucks. But thankfully, I won't have to start until September! Yay! And how the heck are you in Algebra 2? I'm not even 14 yet, and I'm still trying to catch up in Algebra 1 so I'm not behind in Geometry next year... jeez, you must be smart...
Flib, you're amazing.
-Strudel |
 Fiona12690 2007-06-12 . chapter 1Gah! I loved it and it was cute too. Sasuke going overprotective while still getting angry is amazing!
-Rogue |
 Brittany 2007-05-29 . chapter 1 That was cute, and about who will laugh at you:
No one, I think you will be beautiful in your dress.
. . . Or maybe one. But you won't notice.
xD |
 karierte 2007-05-29 . chapter 1Another fic to go into a C2 |
 peoy 2007-05-20 . chapter 1 it was good but i wish it was longer. |
 Kaikouken 2007-05-13 . chapter 1No Kishimoto-sensei is a 19 year old girl, partially blind, chocolate addict, who pimps out almost painfully stupid SasuNaru fiction and has no life whatsoever. XDD
Anyway *whacks you on the head* stop calling your writing skills mediocre. They are awesome, you have the talent and potential to become a great writer.
This story was fluffy and sweet, a delightful and refreshing change from the usual SasuNaru stories. That is what I like best about your writing, they are so refreshing and cute! ^_^
You make the characters pretty much IC and that is awesome. Naruto is really hard to write! Anyhow, this was more or less plotless but, still it made me giggle.
It was cute, really. The last part made me grin like an idiot.
Your stories have such a nice feel, be proud!
And on a side note, since I always do seem to talk a lot, I wish you luck for the formal dress thingie. I hope no one laughs at you XDD
Great one shot! ^_~ |
 Lovely Spell 2007-05-12 . chapter 1nice i enjoyed this one...poor naruto though... *tree* |
 oblivion keyblade 2007-05-12 . chapter 1Umm, wtfh? why didn't you say it was yaoi? I hate the Naruto Sasuke pairing. ew. Other than that, it's a start to a somewhat good story, of course without the freaking yaoi crap. again, ew. |
 Tama Saga 2007-05-12 . chapter 1You blind asshole, add a yaoi sign.
Puke. |