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| Your Worshipfulness 2008-06-20 ch 1,  | abuseI absolutely loved the way you blended the two stories together, and Darcy's little daydream was so perfect. Thanks so much for writing it. ~Your Worshipfulness |
| sequinedfasade 2008-05-07 ch 1, | abuseReally fascinating! I guess Darcy was just daydreaming? Very cool. |
| ChristinaAngel 2008-03-22 ch 1, | abuseI thought the Darcy and Elizabeth bit was a bit random but I get it now! I liked how you linked it into the conversation that was going on at the start. |
| mantharie 2008-02-18 ch 1, | abuseVery nice little tidbit. I know which scene from Mansfield Park you're talking about, and I love the connection. Great work! |
| Sarcastic102391 2008-02-10 ch 1, | abuseyour weird buddist nun's and plucking out eyes humph |
| 57mannequins 2008-02-10 ch 1, | abuseOoh, very lovely. I liked this very much. A clever twist as well. Ah, Mr. Darcy. Distracted, indeed :) |
| Maila Lendy 2007-11-20 ch 1, anon. | abuseThat was good. Really good. I loved it. |
| annna 2007-09-18 ch 1, anon. | abusegreat story! while reading I first thought that it seemed a bit irrealistic how Darcy went after Elizabeth - but this short daydream while the others are having a conversation over the anecdote is great and I really like the ending - how you managed to show us so subtle what's the reality (not with a 'and then he woke up' or something like that) - first Elizabeth's answer which is fitting for both his daydream and the reality than Miss Bingley which reminds us of the conversation in the beginning and the last sentence telling us that Darcy forgot to move his hand really great story |
| Jesse Hayes 2007-08-07 ch 1, | abuseAmazing! I loved every second of it. |
| highflutter 2007-07-04 ch 1, | abuseI enjoyed reading this very much, this little flight of fancy. I can picture the scene in my mind - always the sign of a good writer! |
| godsdanceg 2007-06-27 ch 1, | abuseYou did an excellent job wih this story. The dialogue especially, it was completley in character and the style fit so well with the time period, this truly is a work of genius. The only thing was I ot a little confused because I thought that Mr. Darcy and Elizabeth had left the room but then the conversation resumes as if they hadn't. Maybe I just missed something but if I didn't then you might want to fix that. Anuways, it was amazing. |
| olivia 2007-06-08 ch 1, anon. | abuseah! more chapters please! |
| Sinopa 2007-06-08 ch 1, | abuseWonderfully done, I must say. The language is perfect, and the scene is perfect, I could see them in the sitting room. Everyone was very much in character, and I applaud you for that and keeping it within the actually story. love. |
| doddle 2007-05-31 ch 1, | abusei love how you've done this. the middle was a little confusing, but i love the fact it was the ending that made it all make sense. and how you implied darcy's growning felling for lizzy with somthing as simply as ink on paper. a very good fic. i loved it |
| Dahlila 2007-05-16 ch 1, anon. | abusethat was hot! |