I Loved this story, especially since it's so true. Satan really does need to find a new hobby, besides wreaking everybody's life.

Awesome.

It's pretty good. Nice job.
The one concern I have is that it seems to have a bit of an over-confident tone to it. Yes, Our Lord Jesus Christ can defeat Satan. No question. However, we have free will and we are responsible for our own souls. We can save our soul by our free will... and we can also lose our soul by our free will. It is up to us. Yes, we must turn to Our Lord Jesus Christ, and we can have full confidence that He will help us... IF we strive to live our lives in goodness and grace. THAT is up to us. We should NEVER be over-confident about it... because that is exactly when we are most vulnerable to Satan... when we commit the sin of Presumption. Beware.
So anyway, just wanted to make that point. Sorry it's a bit long.
The poem is still pretty good. Over all, it makes a good point. No, we should not ignore Satan. Ignoring him gives him power to do evil. We have to strive against evil... or it will flourish because of our apathy. You are not ignoring Satan. Good for you. Keep it up. Well done.

I'm Christian too, and I have to tell you his I don't think God would appreciate this poem because why do we even need to talk to satan? I believ that God just wants us to talk to him.

You...suck...so ** bad. Your fic makes my eyes bleed. It's what i would expect from a 12 year old, not a 17 year old. You must be from a southern state, their education is awful. "why don’t you just crawl into a whole?" It's hole, you reatrded little **. Why don't you try reading something besides the Bible, maybe you'll learn something. Like how to not be a stuck up, holier-than-thou **.

Truly magnificent :).

Yeah! This is awesome!

Spike

That was so awesome! It was very inspiring and uplifting for me as a Christian.

So much anger, pain, passion and pride of being saved! I love it! Amen to that sister! Our Big Bro is always wif us...i actually pictured a scene of me standing by Jesus side, holding His hand and turning my back from Satan! Actually im going through a tough spiritual struggle even if i do have quiet time...its not enough...thanx for writing this and bringing out your true feelings...well its not about feelings to begin with but the right thing to do! AMEN! Pls pray for me and i'll pray for you always! Keep in touch...God bless!

I have to say, that was marvelous. I couldn't help but laugh aloud when I read "Get a life". Man, I was excited when I read that. Makes me want to tape it to my head so every time he tries to tempt me, he reads it. Awesome job, babe. God bless.

Good job! you are so gifted - Keep using your gift for God!

It's good. I found that it had a bit of a childish tone, though, in its dealing with the subject matter (just my impression of it)... but I think I know what you are trying to say and beyond that it had a lot going for it. Nice work.
Keep it up!

(Just note to sibbo: We are not supposed to love Evil. Ever. We are supposed to fight it and defend ourselves and others from it. Always.)

Ahh, I can just feel the Christian love and forgiveness radiating off your person.