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| crazsomedude 2007-05-27 ch 1,  | abusewell, it was a rather differnt story. I won't lie, the setting was never clear, and the plot of the story wasn't clear either. I would suggest you add another chapter to the story, just to get things clear. I did like all the action in the story though. It is goo, keep it up. |