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| Arsenic-Requiem 2007-08-11 ch 5,  | abuseLoL! xD i absolutely adore this fic xD! I just find it and I think its amazing! xD keep going! :p |
| emotionalize. 2007-08-07 ch 5, | abuseI'm really enjoying these chapters. The story is great. I'd love to see how they end up. And, if possible what Kayla turns out like. You're doing a great job. I hope you finish it soon. =] |
| kangaroos 2007-07-25 ch 5, | abusewell done, liking the fic, but it did get a little confusing for me, but i caught up. please update. |
| red 2007-07-10 ch 3, anon. | abuseI'm sorry that there's stupid people out there like that reviewer..I prefer giving positive feedback and if i don't have nothing nice to say i just don't say anything...I think the story has potential ecxept that the updates are too short and you should develop the characters a bit more and explain things as you go rather than letting the reader guess what's going on because sometimes the sentence or thaught isn't as clear but overall i like the story so far...Keep writing. :) |
| Shadow in the wind 2007-07-03 ch 5, | abuseI like it so far.haha Kayla is soo cute!! Update soon! |
| dran 2007-06-30 ch 5, anon. | abuseawesomes can't wait for more |
| nnn 2007-06-22 ch 5, anon. | abuseplease continue |
| reena 2007-06-14 ch 5, anon. | abuseGREAT! I totally love it so far! update soon. |
| SpySkater 2007-06-05 ch 5, | abusePoor Kayla and Alex. Alex is going to have a hard time explaining this. LOL. PMS |
| Palexiot 2007-05-27 ch 5, | abuseHahaha... "Momma's a lesbian" that is like the greatest line ever. I love it. This is what I was hoping for. Thank you, wonderful job totally. |
| Gabby5 2007-05-27 ch 5, anon. | abuseI thought your story was great at first I was a bit confused but then it all pieced together but I just don't get the part where Kayla over hears them talking because it sounds like Alex hasn't seen paige in a while well it's a great story though! |
| IcyMint 2007-05-21 ch 4, | abuseAh yes, Ibi Kaslik owns that line, I believe. I suppose Stars has some patent to it as well. You like Stars? Love Stars...and I love the story too. Ignore the idiot reviewers. "A pipe gives a wise man time to think and a fool something to stick in his mouth" The Axiom of the Pipe. We need some pipes on this site. |
| paige4alex 2007-05-20 ch 4, | abuseDon't let them other people tell you that this fan fic cause it don't and i'm not just saying that because i love palex im saying that because im loving the way your writing this. anyways PMS Plz |
| Forgotten Relic 2007-05-20 ch 4, | abuselol, the continious 'your alex' bits were just cracking me up, well done, but I really hope that you're not describing paige because it seems rather OOC, if it's not paige I'm really curious to know who this character is... anyway, you're doing a good job so keep it up |
| They-Call-Me-Orange 2007-05-20 ch 4, | abuseWell, I got your PM. Then I got your review. So, I decided to return the favor. There are some serious jackasses out there. Your work is going to get dissed. That's a given. Best thing you can do right now is ignore them. Because, as much as it sucks, you have no other options. Don't let Fabulous get to you. She's... prickly. And a reviewer of mine and I hate to take sides. But if I had to I'd take yours. It's not cool to just go around bashing. Try to at least be constructive. Personally I really enjoy what you're doing here. Keep it up, your stuff is definitely worth reading. -Orange |