 Lusankya 2007-05-16 . chapter 2I found it cute. It was a pretty standars Flinx though, nothing really out of the ordinary, but I found it cute. I did prefer the part in Kid Flash's point of view, but you could have been more consistent in the way you portrayed his thoughts; in the first half, his mind goes at 100 mph then suddenly stops. Also, it got very cheezy at the end, and that wasn't very consistent with the portrayal you did of Kid Flash in the begining. I am sorry if my review sounds mostly negative and realize that it will clash with the ''yay, so cute write more NOW'' you probably got until now, but I think it needed to be said. I hope my comments will prove to be helpful. |
 CSFlinxStalker 2007-05-14 . chapter 2Yay, fluffiness! XD Sorry I didn't review the first time 'round, but here I am here! Very cute story here, and I loved it. X3 I'd like to see what else you have planned for the rest of us Flinxers.
~Asteriah, the Cs and Flinx Stalker |