I liked this! =] It's rare that you get to see some in-depth look at Marui's character. Though I was quite confused at first, I quickly caught on to the message you were trying to put across. And it was portrayed nicely. The last line was perfect ending. Great job demosthenes-san! =]

I love it but.. I was just wondering.. why was the girl crying? Is that girl the same as the "Kaeda" girl?

I left a reiew in your lj too. :)

Ouch. That was sad :(

But I liked it, that's all that really matters '3'

Nice work. I also liked how you gave Marui more of a human light, especially with his thoughts.

oh. very nice. All the italics were sorta confusing, but other than that, it was well written.