 bhoney 2009-04-09 . chapter 1I like that Caleb and Sam went to the trouble to find out what the essay was about/why Dean hadn't written it yet. John should've done that himself, especially knowing what holiday was coming up. Very sweet of Dean to talk to Sam's teacher so they didn't have a repeat of the incident from "What Moms Do". Love Sam's earnest desire to help, and the way he and Caleb helped Dean come up with things he'd gotten from their mom.
This was, of course, my favorite part. I knew it was coming, and was so happy to read it:
“It just hit me… but we forgot to list the best thing your Mom gave you.” It was something Caleb’s mother had never been able to give him. “And you saved it from the fire.”
Dean frowned. “What’s that?”
Caleb forced a grin. “Your little brother.” Reaves didn’t wait for a reply, pulling the door closed behind him.
Dean sat quietly alone, staring at the paper no longer daunting. With a contented sigh, he picked up the pencil and in big bold letters wrote ‘SAM’.
Aw, very sweet. |
 barei86 2008-07-29 . chapter 1I've just re-read that story and it's so beautiful. I just love these boys. Thank for sharing it! Keep going, you are a wonderful writer!
greetings |
 supergirl3684 2008-04-15 . chapter 1that was so beatiful!! it brought tears to my eyes! |
 iamborg 2008-04-11 . chapter 1Not sure if you realise this, but power rangers came out in 1993. So how can Caleb mention it in this story? Sam is too young for power rangers to have come out |
 Charlie Girl 79 2008-01-21 . chapter 1Great job! It's amazing the gifts Mary gave Dean in such a short time and that others can see the beauty within that smart mouthed boy.
You have a wonderful gift of capturing the heart of the Winchesters. |
 PipkinTwo 2008-01-05 . chapter 1Wow, this one was gorgeous! it would have been so hard to come up with stuff about his mum, but aw, it was soo nice!
Thanks
Pip |
 SpocktasticKirkalicious 2008-01-05 . chapter 1Wow. All I can say is that you have a strong understanding of Sam and Dean's relationship, and I really admire that. I love that Caleb and Sammy helped Dean with the assignment that they all could relate to, and I loved the ending about Sam being Dean's greatest gift from his mom. Wonderful job, as usual! |
 SUPERNATURALfreakisJOBROFAN19 2007-12-17 . chapter 1I cried. |
 CyberSupernatural 2007-09-27 . chapter 1Aw, so sweet. |
 garrettignasia 2007-09-02 . chapter 1*sniff* *sob**wail*
OMG! *sniffle*
i cant even see the freaking keyboard im crying so hard!
*wipes nose* *x2* *sniff*
i dont think i can ever give you enough praise...
especially for this one.
it should be in a C2 if its not yet. |
 adictd2life 2007-08-07 . chapter 1so sweetand sad and that last part, "your little brother"
I swear, I think I felt a couple of tears. Awesome job! |
 imissmymind 2007-07-21 . chapter 1That ending is the most friggen adorable thing I have ever read in my life. Seriously. Great job with this, especially the dialogue. |
 supernatural-sweet-hearts 2007-07-14 . chapter 1hey
my fav so far. Dean's smart ** comments,Sammy being cute,Dean's homework and Mary. |
 catgirl789 2007-06-17 . chapter 1Aw That was so sweet! |
 Supernoodle 2007-06-12 . chapter 1Oh, that was so good. Sad and sweet and thoughtful.
You are such a good writer! |