I liked it. Poignant

Beautifully written. Lle ume quel. (You did well) Now I must go work on my Elvish. You never know when their great race will return.. Namaerie! Aa' menle nauva calen ar' ta hwesta e' ale' quenle. (Farewell! May thy paths be green and the breeze on they back.)

Now I love this ::loves anything with elves..utterly worthless this one is:: I love your wording, the way you placed the words together..

This is awesome! You're a wonderful poet!

Hello, great poem it's got a great meaning.

Keep writing! Good job!

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Awesome Poem! I just love it! Its rather sad though...

Ooh, sweet! Me likes the last two lines especially!

aww, that was good. I wish Elves lived on Earth in real life. i would want to be one :) great poem! It took alot of talent to write!

Oy oy oy! Good poem! It rhymed really well, nice scheme and all... Ooo, Ahhh...