PLEASE DEAR GOD! Finish the story I beg you! Awesome story Paisley as always

AHHHH WRITE MORE! I am addicted to this masterpiece you have written!
I have enjoyed myself so much!
I would love to read the rest! Please finish soon!

This was just getting good! Not that I didn't like the beginning, but it was getting much more interesting towards the end.

Where's the Rest?!

ahhh! this is such a twisted story, but i like it. i can't wait for the next chapter!

Update soon. It's nice to see a more human side of Hook. Can't wait to see what happens next with Wendy/Jill and her kids.

I'm at a loss for words. I must say the way you write, the way you can capture the feeling, thoughts and surrounding is simply wonderful. I admire you for this ability. Reading this story has brought a lot of joy to my day and one feels as though you yourself could be Wendy (the original one) considering how you are able to portray everything.
I love all the little details hinting at Neverland being far more than any book ever described to us and just how the original characters are so important to everything happening. The last few chapters with young Wendy's/Jill's family just sent chills down my spine.

I really hope you haven't abandonded this story since I am looking forward to how their story goes on

Excellent tale so far. I do hope that you continue on with this fanfiction. Thank you for sharing what you have so far.

This is really sick but I still keep reading it. Well written and fascinating somehow, but I don't like Hook at all in this... Too dark for me :D

Oh my, what a story. I do hope you continue. It's too good to just stop. How is it that someone who starts off so horrible can have you loving him anyway in the end? That handsome James Hook, always teasing us females, haha. You are a fantastic writer. :)

Wow. This is really quite brilliant. I love your character development. I truly hated Captain Hook in the beginning of this story. He was such a villain (which he should be) and yet, as the story progressed, I began to feel differently about him. I believe that this proves how great of a writer you are! You have given heart in what I had perceived was a heartless beast!

Thank you for writing this story! I do hope that you have not fully given up on this great adventure though. It has me hooked and I feel that I must know how it will all be resolved.

More please :D

Please Please Please update this story soon! I love this!

This story is the first one I ever read here on fanfiction, it's what inspired me to start writing myself!

I would have reviewed earlier but I couldn't remember the name and have been searching for this story since 2009! I love the way you put everything, including the lemons and smush.

This is truly my favorite story ever on fanfiction and I hope you keep it up!

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Oh my gosh. In case you've forgotten previous reviews of mine, I've been reading this story for as long as you've been writing it. And, in all honesty, this is by far my all time favorite Peter Pan fanfic that I've ever found. It's amazing in every way, and I absolutely love how you've written it. Please finish it! I would be devastated if it was never completed! That's how much I love this story! Keep going! I'm always on the edge of my seat, and everything about this story is perfect! Update as soon as you can! Please! I love what you're doing here! :]

Hook is a FAH-REAK! This story was not what I expected and I was completely enthralled, fascinated and repulsed by Hook (followed by a severe hankering for him, lol) and was rooting for Wendy throughout. Please don't abandon this story, especially since Hook is so close (or is he?) to the end of his search for Wendy and his kids!