Please tell me that you ar gona kontinjou whit this fanficton i want to now what wil hapend to Iruka and Kakashi

WHY DO YOU KEEP DOING THIS? I read the handful of chapters, and I notice that there's no more. 'Oh, okay!' I keep thinking, 'Maybe she's working on the new chapter right now!' But NO. This hasn't been updated in five years. FIVE YEARS. And this isn't the first time you've done this! There's a delay, and then there's this! There has to be a line somewhere, don't you think?

Please continue this soon! I really want to read some more!

I am emotionally invested and then you go and STOP WRITING!

why's you do that? this story is so promising then it screeches to a halt after four chapters!

I guess its pointless to ask if it will ever be updated?

You never finished the fics, right.

Wah, I'm so disappointed this has been abandoned :( It's nice to find stories that are a little different than the same-old same-old Kakairu that gets passed around. And I really want to know what the deal is with Iruka's step-father!

But I know how it is to just lose interest in a story, so cheers for writing this far anyway. I'll subscribe anyway, just in case ;)

It's such a shame to find a great plotted fic stopped before the end. This fic was great and worth the read even if we don't find out what happens.

Thanks for posting the chapters you did. :-)

interesting fic, hope to see more.

pls continue, it's very interesting

This is too cool! hehe Please Update! i love how smoothly it went.. no mistakes or watsoever! even if it did and i missed it just goes to show how well written it is!.. Update this as soon as u can please! XD hehehe

Please continue! This sounds great and I'd love to see this new city with Iruka's roots. More please more!

This is great, a completely new twist on Iruka's past, and a very good one. Great work!

oh dear and that is why one never hides their past if they can help it lol very well done a few miss spelled words but it flows well and ill be waiting for new chapters

it just stops? you need to update! this is a very very interesting plot and i love it. once more, update!

Like all your other stories, this is excellent. I am wondering, however, when the rest of it will be posted. It's been more than a year and you've actually started a sequel to Pieces now. Have you abandoned this, because I really like where this is going. I'm particularly eager to see how you'll deal with the issue of firearms against ninjutsu.