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Reviews For: Passing Encounter

Critical Aidan
2008-07-21
ch 1,
abuseWell, all I can say is that this is a great short story. Unlike other stories, not much is to be said that the title doesn't say. It is as it says, a small passing encounter that has little difference in plot or story, but shows an impeicablely careful watch to capturing the show's tone in word format. The silence of the girl was perfect, and also explained well, and the overall description painted a perfect picture, taking me directly into the scene that was shown. Though, there's not much to improve on when you have such a short and consice story as this. It's no epic of course, but it is perfect for what it is. A definate fave.

Signed,

Aidan
goldengal
2007-06-06
ch 1,
abusethat was cute. you should write a sequel.
MercutioPuck
2007-05-27
ch 1,
abuseI kinda dig it. A very nice encounter with Jack. Sometimes a brief meeting with the hero really tells a story, even if it only happens for a few seconds. Thankfully, Jack's quest is so momentous and long that every little detail has a tale. Many people (including myself) like to focus on Aku, but stories like this are a rarity and it's nice to see a change of pace.

You should also read my Story. The Ruins of Oz: starring Samurai Jack. I would love to hear your input.

Keep up the good work!
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